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Losing weight

Poet_Jessica's picture

If...

If I could explain to you,
how much I rely on your support,
would you continue to hurt yourself,
and watch my face contort?

Maybe if I showed you,
that I could die without you...

If you could even fathom,
the pain I'm in...

But nothing I say,
has any effect.
You could go either way,
I do expect.

But maybe if I told you,
that your pain wounded me...

If something I said,
showed you what you REALLY mean to me...

If your belt fit your pants,
then you might have a chance,
but nothing you eat,
has meaning.

I know this.
You know this.
It's killing us both.

Usagi's picture

Beauty on the Outside

Values as shallow as the billboards we proclaim them on
All bright colors and glossy smiles
So happy! So fun! Superficially
That's all that matters.
Look at their faces.
Don't you wish your life was that good?

Beauty's only skin deep, people say
But so often
It's only skin that matters anyway
Superficial, yes
But how much of our lives is not?

Work so hard to get so thin

Weight

Wheat
Egg plant
Ina beans
Green Bean
Hungarian Rice
Tasty Weat

queenbee's picture

Weightless

Weightless

By Blaise Gervais
Burlington High School, Grade 9

The drops slide down my body
Salt mingling with the pure, honest streams of life
They weave together sliding over the scars,
Of sorrow imprinted on my skin,
Washing away the blemishes
of guilt and regret.

As the water slithers
Like silvery snakes through my scalp
It tickles the nape of my neck

The Big Fat Lie

The Big Fat Lie

By Caitlyn Reilly
Dover School, Grade 6

Some people think that being skinny is the only way to be popular and have friends. That is the big fat lie. being overweight isn't the end of the world. It's not like if you are 1 pound over you'll be an outcast. So for all those girls who think that being overweight is the worst possible thing, It's not. It's the big fat lie!

The Big Fat Lie

Some people think that being skinny is the only way to be popular and have fiends. That is the big fat lie. being overweight isn't the end of the world. It's not like if you are 1 pound over you'll be an outcast. So for all those girls who think that being overweight is the worst possible thing, It's not. It's the big fat lie!

The Big Fat Lie

Some people think that being skinny is the only way to be popular and have fiends. That is the big fat lie. being overweight isn't the end of the world. It's not like if you are 1 pound over you'll be an outcast. So for all those girls who think that being overweight is the worst possible thing, It's not. It's the big fat lie!

The Big Fat Lie

Some people think that being skinny is the only way to be popular and have fiends. That is the big fat lie. being overweight isn't the end of the world. It's not like if you are 1 pound over you'll be an outcast. So for all those girls who think that being overweight is the worst possible thing, It's not. It's the big fat lie!

horselover4's picture

Losing Weight

Losing Weight

By Lydia Garland
Dummerston School, Grade 7

Losing Weight

The pressure today to become skinny is too great.

The "Look"

Girls feel like they need to do anything to be popular.
I would know; I used to be one of them.
According to some schools, you need at least these three things to become popular:
1. You have to have the "I'm so much better than you, so why bother trying" attitude.
2. You have to have the popular football boyfriend.
3. And you MUST have the Look, and a lot of girls don't have it.

Losing Weight

Losing Weight

By Kelsey Johnson
Hartford High School, Grade 10

Girls feel like they need to do anything to be popular.
I would know; I used to be one of them.

According to some schools, you need at least these three things to become popular:
1. You have to have the "I'm so much better than you, so why bother trying" attitude.
2. You have to have the popular football boyfriend.

Ultimate Weight Loss

Ultimate Weight Loss

By Eli Millman
Fairfield Center School, Grade 8

When I say “losing weight” what is the first thing you think of? I am willing to bet you think of FAT. Whether it is starving yourself, exercising like mad, or diet pills, you think of excess blubber.

Her Empty State

Her Empty State

By Chloe Dickinson
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10

Reflection

Reflection

By Chelsea Lumbra
Fairfield Center School, Grade 8

When you look at your reflection, what do you see?
Do you see perfection
And smile with glee?

Or, do you make yourself throw up, day after day
Wanting to be thin
Thinking it’s the only way?

Do you workout to no end?
Every chance that you get, doing push-ups and crunches
Hours in the weight room do you spend?

Weightless in Motion

Weightless in Motion

By Samantha Burns
Fairfield Center School, Grade 8

Pressure builds up
Can’t break it down
Overflowing the full cup
Turn it around
Look back
Look back
Look back
And smile
At the tracks
You’ve laid for miles
Tears released from your eyes
Weightless emotion
You’re free
Now fly

Weight

Weight

By Julie Curran
Main Street Middle School, Grade 7

Building.
Up.
Up.
Up.
Too much
To carry.
Too much
To hold.
I can’t
Bear
This pain.
I can’t hide
This
Burden.

You
Comfort me.

There’s nothing
In the world.

There’s nothing
More to
Do.

No
One can
Hold you
Down.

Weight.

Dropping.
Down
Down
Down.

You are
FREE.

losing weight

diet pills
lypo
stomach staples
not for me!
excersize
eating right
is all i see in my eyes

losing weight

diet pills
lypo
stomach staples
not for me!
excersize
eating right
is all i see in my eyes

xoxjulieee213's picture

Eat

Sitting in class a girl grows hungry; she hasn’t eaten in three days. She asks to be excused, the hurries out of the room. She runs down the hall to the cafeteria and buys cookies, a donut and a large soda. She then casually walks out to the hall, and once out of sight of the cafeteria lady, she sprints to a vacant place below a staircase, unable to be seen by anyone wandering the halls.

Subway is the way

Dont wait
To loss weight
Start to
On this date
Lose wight
The Subway way

Losing Weight

Loss
Of
Significance,
It
Never
Goes away,

Worry,
Eating
Is
Getting
Hard
To fight

Losing Weight

Why does it matter?
Who really has a say
in how you feel
and what you do
for your appearance
each and every day.

loosing weight

Loosing weight

Being jealous of other people
Wishing you were someone else
Trying hard to look skinny
Thinking you’re not good enough

Trying everything you can
There is dieting
Or even making your food come back up
Maybe just not eating

Loosing weight…
Forget about what you see
See what’s inside the person
Not outside

Weight

Haven't you ever heard of "What counts it what's inside?" Well it's true. Sure if you were extremely overweight you'd want to lose a couple of pounds; but that's for health reasons. Nobody cares how heavy you are. It's what is inside that counts.

Losing Weight

Losing Weight

By Alicia Waite
Rochester High School, Grade 9

Fat, skinny and in between,
No matter what people can be mean,
It makes you wonder and it makes you think,
Sometimes it takes you to the brink,

Television newspapers and magazines,
People always trying to fit between the scenes,
Never feeling good enough,
But always acting tough.

Celebrities make it seem too easy,
But they are really oh so cheesy,
With their plastic surgery and liposuction,
Without these so-called necessities they could not function,

Physical features can’t always be read,
You have to look deeper instead,
Look past the illusion and find your heart,
Think things through before you start,
Because loosing weight can be great,
But going to far will tempt fate.

Just remember you are who you are,
And be careful not to take it too far,
Because celebrities have no problem going under the knife,
But for us, there is so much more to life.

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