week7-08
VISUALS
Submitted by ggevalt on October 14, 2007 - 17:24.
The Young Writers Project is looking for great student art to publish each week! These pictures were taken by Angela Nye of Essex High School. Click on the photo for more. If you want to submit your photos for potential outside publication, click here for more info. Click here to see the image galleries for the last two years.
We are also looking for you writers to comment on your fellow artists' photos or art work. If you feel like writing something -- a story or a poem or whatever -- based on either of these photos, click on either of the photos and leave a comment -- a poem or a story -- below the picture!
NEWSAPER SERIES -- Week 7
Submitted by ggevalt on October 14, 2007 - 16:50.The deadline for Winter Tales and Symphony Poems has been extended to FRIDAY Nov.2. Don't miss the opportunity to have your work chosen to be read on stage! For more, click here.
To submit: register, sign in, click on "create content" and create an "entry".
WEEK SEVEN
The seventh week of the 2007/08 YWP Newspaper Series -- with content published in five daily newspapers in Vermont and New Hampshire -- featured responses to prompts: Attic and Perusasion. Click the image to the left to see or download the Rutland Herald page as a pdf.
Click here for student writing.
Click here for Times Argus or Brattleboro Reformer versions.
See "VISUALS" for more about the photographs.
Click here for index of past weeks' pages.

DAILY READ: The box
Submitted by eoleames on October 5, 2007 - 09:12.By Elena Eames
Dummerston Middle School, Grade 8
An old box in my attic
filled with memories
joyful and harsh times
crammed into a tiny box
sitting in my attic.
I crawled through the stuffy heat, my arms and legs sticky like honey. It sat in the center of the small attic as if it wanted me to wipe off the years of dust and pry it open. Sunlight poured through the tiny window illuminating my newly found treasure. An intricate design was cut into the red wood, an expensive old box, no doubt. I gingerly traced the carved swirls and patterns thinking of who had cherished this box before me, who had hidden their secrets inside it and who had lived and loved and packed their life in a box to be found by me.
My Attic
Submitted by LeeMcIsaac on October 2, 2007 - 13:45.By Izzy Moody
Monkton Central School, Grade 5
My attic is where I go when I need to think. It’s a room of inspiration. A cupboard packed full of fresh stories. I like to sit in an old wooden rocking chair in the corner, by the window. I call it my rainy day chair. I sit there and look out the window onto the coloring maple trees. It’s like looking onto an artist’s palette. I can sit there for hours on end and not write a single word. Writing takes time. You need to observe and think. You need to process your ideas. Other times I write everything that’s on my mind and transfer it all onto paper.

Gifts From the Pocket
Submitted by YaMoGeekRoZ on September 27, 2007 - 22:40.By Moya Cavanagh
Browns River Middle School, Grade 8
Ho hum
The pocket sings,
Off to wander
The world.
Nestled in
Folds of grace,
Silken gold
The pocket
Waits,
A sanctuary for
Little things
Ribbons
Gloves
A piece of string
The pocket is home
To every thing.
Flying with
Spinning tiers of
Lace,
The pocket is
A special place,
A wormhole between
Time,
Generations slide by
The Attic
Submitted by ehcoon on September 27, 2007 - 11:02.The Attic
By Emily Coon
Mount Mansfield Union High School, Grade 12
She breaks the cradle
for firewood,
splintering along seams,
rocking horse dreams
melting away
beneath heat’s lick.
She folds up red jumpsuits,
places bobble hats
quietly
inside
an oaken box
her father left.
She turns a key
swift click
of oblivion.
She lifts it to a high shelf
above the window
worn leather toes
stretching up
as she caresses its lock
and hinges.
It sits, stunted
embryo of memory,
a seed entombed
in its white paper
packet, waiting
to grow.
Suds for Buds
Submitted by Kacie Collins on September 26, 2007 - 13:22.By Kacie Collins
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
Everyday Persuasions
Submitted by Reddog on September 26, 2007 - 13:21.Everyday Persuasions
By Henry Farrand
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
Persuasions of the day
Affect us in every way
Thoughts you kept to yourself
But then changed by someone else
Ideas and memories held once dear
Changed by sound for slightest ear
Persuasion to me
Is like looking through an eye you cannot see
Reading people
Knowing that they may be feeble
Using your mind
Persuaded by me!
Submitted by ChloePage on September 26, 2007 - 11:28.Persuaded by Me!
By Chloe Dickinson
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
First I ask nicely, that’s always the key
Smile politely; they’ll like what they see.
I’ll carefully craft the question and wait,
To see if they’ve followed my bait.
But if they don’t my honesty ensues
And they learn all my reasons and views.
My blunt opinion comes out of it all

Into the Dark
Submitted by nanakamonkeysis on September 26, 2007 - 11:27.By Noellen Neisner
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
It was musty up there
In the attic
Where the old possessions were kept
Out of sunlight
Until the day the curious step out of the light
And into the dark.

Persuasion
Submitted by seanb007 on September 26, 2007 - 11:15.By Sean Bjornsson
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
Hey man, could you do this for me?
I would love you forever.
You know you want to.
C’mon, I can’t do it, I’m totally swamped.
Please? It would be great if you could.
You don’t want to?
Well, that’s a shame.
I was trying to be nice about it,
But he said you have to.
What do you mean you don’t believe me?

Persuade Me
Submitted by greenie on September 25, 2007 - 20:30.By Misha Kydd
Mount Mansfield Union High School, Grade 9
Talk to me.
Honeyed words, liquid and thick,
Dripping, coating my mind,
Making me believe,
Bending my will with sugar-coated
Voice.
Dimly I'm aware that I have feelings,
Opinions of my own,
But you talk so sweetly,
Your ideas seem better,
Seem right.
I am afraid to think,
To reason,
Since you are so sure,
So positive,
Little Brass Box
Submitted by Greg on September 25, 2007 - 20:29.Little Brass Box
By Greg Goedewaagen
Woodstock Union High School, Grade 10
Sun shines through the crudely spaced walls,
casting highlights of gold on a dust carpeted floor.
And while the wind weeps its weary call,
there’s a little brass box that hears no one, sees no one,
for one day and a few more, and back again.
Strength is for the Lonely: A Lesson in Persuasion
Submitted by mpekarik on September 25, 2007 - 19:55.By Molly Pekarik
Mount Mansfield Union High School, Grade 9
Tilt your head a little more
Look through the corner of your eyes
Smile more unsurely than is necessary
Above all be polite
Make yourself smaller, the bench is long
Clasp your hands nervously
Flip your hair
Laugh at all his jokes
Order another glass of water
Part your lips slightly
Plead with your eyes
Ask to share your desert
Wipe the whipped cream off his face
Let him help you out the door
Talk before you get in the car
Brush his arm gently
And grin off-center
Do not protest when he sweeps you
Into a long embrace
Kiss him back
Hold it a minute longer than you want to
Cast your eyes down and pull your coat tighter
Yes, there will be another date.

