May 19
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IM SO SOORRRY ;-;

Sorry that I haven't been posting lately lots of baseball and other stuff, ill post a poem though


An Ode To The Untouchable

The Untouchable
Un-A prefix meaning “not”

Touchable-The sense of touch in your range

Something out of reach

Not close

But far

Your blinded by it

The lack of being there

What could it feel like?

Soft?

Rough?

Cold?

Hot?

Smooth?

Bumpy?

So many possibilities

What could it be?

Does it hurt?

It could be a ice cube

Slowly 

D r i p p i n

            G

Down your back

It could be 

A thorn bush piercing your skin

It could be a splinter 

The untouchable and touchable

Isn't the table

It's the splinter you get from the table
Apr 29
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The start of my creepy plague doctor drawings.

Apr 29
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PENELOPE

Okay PENELOPE, wow thanks for all the support, I really appreciate it! 


PENELOPE  APR 16, 2021

That's awesome!



PENELOPE  APR 08, 2021

Haha! I love all of those things especially snowboarding and skateboarding, they are my favs. Buttttt not so much video games. I think it would be cool if you post your drawings.


PENELOPE  APR 09, 2021

That's awesome!


PENELOPE  APR 09, 2021

This is a great poem, no wonder they are publishing it!!!

PENELOPE  APR 26, 2021

So cool!




There's probably more, but I'm so thankful, thanks for being so kind and supportive, Thanks again, guys and gals, and in between go look at PENELOPE'S blog!
Apr 16
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POG ALERT!!!

Apr 08
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A little bit about me

A little bit about me
 


I thought you guys and gals and in between would like to know a little about me. First of all, I looooooove drawing, 24/7, I like hiking, biking, skateboarding, snowboarding, and I like playing video games. AND OF COURSE, I like poetry. I'm really into anime and manga, and I like ramen. I like TikTok and short funny vines. I love to have a laugh all the time.


Anyway, now that you know a little about me. I want your advice, should I post my drawings?


Any info is great-thanks

                                    Garrett
Apr 08
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BIG NEWS

BIG NEWS EVERYBODY!

 


Thank you all for the support in your views and likes!
I got word from the admin, that my poem, Old Warehouse, is possible for publication, in this week's Addi Indi Paper!

Wish me good luck, and have a great rest of the week!

Thanks-Garrett
Mar 31
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Only A Fantasy


Only A Fantasy

By Garrett Duell


Only a fantasy
Could bring things
That are unreal,
Fake
Out
Of 
This
World.
If fantasy could talk
Not Haiku
Not short
But long
A fairytale
That lasts forever
Imaginary
What do YOU desire
YOUR world
What would you do with it?
Make it evil?
Good?
Would there be gambling, or peace.
This is not a question
Only you get to answer,
Its real
Your the owner
And only you can do this
A dozen workers on your hand
What would you do with them
Make them work?
Let them go live a happy life?
Only you can decide
In this fantasy
Non-haiku,
World
Deer riders
Elven people
Orcs?
Dwarves?
Dragons?
Only you can decide the nature,
Creatures
Humans
Laws
Only YOU
Decide
Pegasus’s?
What do YOU want to create?
 
Mar 30
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One Word

One Word

By Garrett




One word blared my head
When she left
Ex
Ex
Ex
The drought
The clench in my teeth
My eyes tearing up
The beating music matches my heart
Sad
Intense
Fast
Ex
Ex
Ex
My friends apologizing
For something they did
Not
Do.
My face hung
Over my face
As if I was possessed
Taken away
Seized in my place
Frozen
But warm
Hot, sweaty
Tears in my heart
That can't be undone
Like a shoelace
Muddy
Droopy
Undone.
Crying
Standing
There
My friends telling me there's more
At the time
I didn't believe
I thought that was it
The end
Till the next year
She came
The other
Girl
That I would devote my heart and soul to
My friends
Would say 
Simp
I didn't care
I thought
Mar 29
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Ideas Please

Ideas Please

 
 
I really need new ideas for poems. And Quickly. if you don't get me some I will literally lose it! In the two weeks, I have begun to love poetry. They're really fun and have made me find a deeper understanding of things. Please respond with some ideas, it can be an object, a topic, anything!(please type things I would know of ;) thanks)
Mar 29
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The End Of The Line

The Last Of The Line

By Garrett


Parents shouting
Heart broke,
Divorce
They've hit the end of the line
At rock bottom
Restarting
A clean slate
They cast out the fishing line
And let it sink to the 
Bottom
Clambering feet down the stairs
One-shot out of six
Boom.
Boom.
Boom.
Boom.
Boom.
He’s mad
He's crazy
The smell on his breath
The fuzz on his beard
Rotten 
He's at the end of his line
End of his rope
End of his logic
Like a big Coupe
Sudden
Scary
Unreasonable,
Sirens blaring
Cops everywhere
And yet it seems so quiet
Violent gestures
Scary face
The sweat on my back cutting me in half
Like a butter knife
Hes at the end
The end, the end of his logic, the end of his patience
Shattered at The end of the line
The line sunk to the bottom 
Caught on a rock

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