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Jul 04
poetry
Anna

thoughts on a rainy afternoon

the sky is shy some days.
the clouds prefer not to share
their dazed thoughts
and broken hopes and dreams.

the stars don't often contribute
with their speculations of the world below.

sometimes silence sits still in the night air
and holds us.

but in other stolen moments,
the sky opens up.

the rain falls in reflection
of all the things the world above us
doesn't know how to say.

a whisper in a drizzle
a cry in a downpour

sometimes the world
is willing
to give it all a chance

 
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Posted: 07.04.18
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  1. ShanRippWriting
    Jul 10, 2018

    This was so so wonderful! I do have a question about word choice; in the line "the rain falls in relection," did you mean relection or the word reflection? I loved this, Shannon :)

    Shannon Ripp

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  1. Anna
    Jul 10, 2018

    Oops, that was a typo! Thank you :)

    anna

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