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poem 2 comments challenge: Three
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Love

Baby's first smile,
Friendships that last,
Someone loves you

(Response to the Daily Challenge, Three: Three lines, three words in each line)
Posted: 08.08.18
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About the Author: Sandia
Don't try to impress people, you won't have any happiness, rather inspire people, make them want to laugh, to try again, to be better, then you will find who you want to be.
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  1. Aug 09, 2018

    Welcome to Young Writers Project, Sandia. You're out front today as a Daily Read -- what a great way to start!


     
  1. Aug 09, 2018

    A simple and sweet embodiment of love at it's purest, captured by the image of such a young smile. My one suggestion is to explore alternate, more specific words for "last" , linger? endure? etc.

    The two main ideas, love for a child, and friendship, have inspired me to write my own poem, which I'll "sprout" off of this one, and will be noted below under "sprouted". A great feature of YWP, the sprout button allows you to write a piece inspired by someone else's, and connect them directly. Thank you for the inspiration!
    ~Hazel

    ~Hazel