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Apr 08
fiction 2 comments challenge: Problem
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The Problem I Always Seem to Have

They were about to leave but the is just one problem.

“ grandpa Geno.”

“ What is it Monotone?”

“ I felt this thing like there is new world the the gate to all multiverses. Did you feel it to.”

“ Yeah I felt it to but…”

“ But what grandpa.”

“ Ink has to let us in.”

“ Ink…? What does he have to do with this.”

“ Because he is the protector of the multiverse so if we want in he has to let us in.”

“ but won’t I glitch in there.”

“ No no no no. You won’t glitch in the gateway to the multi….”

“ Geno you need to see this.”

“ Oh hey Ink what’s up.”

“ What’s up WHAT’S UP YOU EXPECT ME TO ANSWER THAT WHEN… Ummmmm, who are they Geno?”

“ Oh there just my family.”

“ Oh and who is the little one.”

“ HEY I DON’T KNOW WHO YOU ARE BUT I AM NOT LITTLE I AM THREE YEARS YOUNGER THAN MY PARENTS YOU NO HP SOUL HAVING PROTECTOR OF THE MULTIVERSE THING.”

* Monotone’s parents and grandpa gasp.*

“ Monotone you don’t say such thing now apologue to ink now.”

“ I’m sorry Ink I just don’t like how people call me little that’s all I hope you can forgive me.”

“ I’m sorry again for the way she acted… ummmm Ink are you okay.”

“ Yeah I’m fine… there’s something that I need to show you and Monotone too.”

“ What is it Ink.”

“ It’s this.”

“ Wow so cool what is this place.”

I did know that the place that we’re in is the multiverse but I just didn’t know what it looked like and now I know what it looks like.

“ this place is amazing.”

“ Yeah it is.”

“ Now Monotone just be careful and don’t go into a AU you got it.”

“ Yeah, yeah I know, I know.”

“ You know you don’t have to tell her that if she already does know it you know.”

“ Yeah I know Ink but... “

“ But what?”

“ We’re not in here has much as anyone else but as smart as she is.”

So I was just looking at the different AU’s when I was pulled into and I screamed for my grandfather and him and Ink followed my scream and they jumped right into the AU.

“ Ink, grandpa help me.”

“ Nightmare you put her down this minute.”

“ and what if I don’t.”

“ I will call Dream.”

“ Like I would care.”

Then I glitched.

“ What the heck was that?”

“ Geno, Geno what was that? What just happened to her.”

“ She glitched.”

“ What do you mean by that?”

“ She can’t stay in a AU for to long or she will start to glitch.”

“ Oh wow that’s nice and all but how long until she glitches out of existence?”

“ Okay that’s it I’m calling Dream.”

Then I glitched again and into the arm of Error ( btw who is Ink enemy well sort of and I like to call him glitchy).

“ Oh great like this couldn’t get any worse.”

“ Hello to you to Monotone.”

“ Hey Error.”

“ Hey Ink.”

“ So what are you doing here Glitchy and also could you put me down.”

“ yeah sure and I wanted to look at this new AU and for some reason he came along.”

“ oh great.”

And that’s basically how my traveling through AU’s started.

 
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  1. ShanRippWriting
    Apr 09, 2019

    I love the use of dialogue in this piece, it lets the reader get to know the character's personalities well!

    Shannon Ripp

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  1. flame
    Apr 11, 2019

    thank you so much.

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