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May 20
poem challenge: General/Free Write
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Ache For A Heart

Most decide to trust those they deem trustworthy
Some decide to trust any they find
Few decide to trust none.
I was one of the few.

But then I met a girl
Who randomly sat with me one afternoon
I began to fall in love
With the the girl that would give me an ache for a heart.

We became close
And dumped our secrets into one another
She was a cutter
And I feared becoming a monster.

It was only after she left
that I finally realized
I dont fear becoming a monster.
I fear the loneliness that comes with it.

I decided to trust her
And I wish I could say she broke that trust
But she never said anything to anyone
She only gave me an ache for a heart.

In the end,
I'll fall in love again
And I can only hope
That they dont leave me

With another Ache For a Heart.







 
Posted: 05.20.20
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  1. May 20, 2020

    I'm sorry... I don't know what to say but that

    "Meet me
    where the end begins,
    in echoes,
    where your world is me,
    and my world is yours."

  1. May 20, 2020

    Dont be. Thats all I can say to that.

    Kayden

  1. May 20, 2020

    :P

    "Meet me
    where the end begins,
    in echoes,
    where your world is me,
    and my world is yours."

  1. May 20, 2020

    I really loved the repeated phrase "ache for a heart" because although seemingly simple, it's not a cliche and really makes you think about it. And I'm not sure when you said" "fall in love" if you meant you liked-liked this person or were speaking platonically, but I took it as in falling in love with a friend, which I think especially in our age group is taken the wrong way. Thank you for this :)

  1. May 20, 2020

    Thanks. (:

    Kayden

  1. May 21, 2020

    Wow, that’s really beautiful:)