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Apr 08
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Rubber Soul

Walk the Bone

This is the demo to a song I'm working on, it has a few vocal/piano mistakes but I want oppinions before I record the finished product. 

walking_the_bone.mp3

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Posted: 04.08.20
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  1. laurenm
    Apr 08, 2020

    I thought this was gorgeous, very well done! I especially like the part around 50 seconds

    "Make it work" - Tim Gunn

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  1. Rubber Soul
    Apr 08, 2020

    Thank you!

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  1. Fiona Ella
    Apr 08, 2020

    i think this is really good! the lyrics gave me chills in a few places, you have a wonderful voice, and i definitely enjoyed listening to it.

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  1. QueenofDawn
    Apr 09, 2020

    Wow. The piano, the lyrics, your voice, it's all awesome. I don't have any recommendations. It's great the way it is.

    "I write because I don't know what I think until I read what I say." -Flannery O'Connor

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  1. Inkpaw
    Apr 10, 2020

    i liented to this three times on repeat. it's really good. the raw emotion in your voice is amazing, and made me cry a little bit, and the backing of the piano is perfect for the slightly melancholy tone. i have no suggestions for you. this is amazing.

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  1. It's the cat
    May 13, 2020

    I love it! Please post the final when you're done. Why does YWP not have an option to like something more than once!!!!

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  1. CrystalWaters
    May 14, 2020

    your voice is beautiful, so is the music!

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  1. A Sports Person
    May 22, 2020

    This is the amazing! I wish I could like this a bazillion times! Great Job!

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