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Oct 16
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activist_fieldhockey

Message to my bff (pt 2: whats his face?)

Sorry ach
I'm writing another one

She was on her last mans
already starting to loose
the hope that seemed so fresh
just in dynamix.
yes
their friends caught them when they fell
but that didn't mean they didn't die
the pain was still there,
though the fresh eyes where still closing
rock still stained the clothes
and no matter how hard she tried
they couldn't wash it off
the memories were there
for good
but this time 
it was different
she wasn't the same ach
desperate for the one thing 
just barely 
out of reach
because grinning was guilt
it was pain
and it was death
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Posted: 10.16.19
About the Author: activist_fieldhockey
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  1. Forever young
    Oct 16, 2019

    omgggg
    <3

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  1. Forever young
    Apr 14, 2020

    OMG this is amazing I just found It again

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  1. Forever young
    Jun 02, 2020

    Whats his face? More like no face bc he sucks

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