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May 14
poetry
Immy

The boy across the aisle

I get on the bus,
for the first time,
it's dark,
but people have lights on,
holding them up to their newspapers,
their books,
I smile at the boy across the aisle,
and he smiles back,
waving his fingers without letting go of his book,
I blush and reach into my bag,
pulling out my own book.

I get on the bus,
for the 100th time,
it's brighter than usual,
and I notice less newspapers,
less books,
now it's phones and computers,
scattered in among the readers,
I stick my tongue out,
at the boy across the aisle,
and he rolls his eyes,
a smile lighting up his face,
then we both look down,
continuing our separate lives,

I get on the bus,
for the 200th time,
I look around, 
not a book in sight,
phones, computers, and tablets light up the faces of all the passengers,
all but one,
he's already looking up from his book,
knowing this is my stop,
but I break our routine,
and I go and take a seat,
next to the boy across the aisle.
 
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Posted: 05.14.21
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  1. Treblemaker
    May 17, 2021

    AAWWWW This is so sweet! What a great way to showthe passage of time and a small blooming friendship <3

    "If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it." - Toni Morrison

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  1. Immy
    May 17, 2021

    Thank you!

    -Immy

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  1. zazu
    May 17, 2021

    This poem made me smile. I hope that those two become friends!

    Zazu

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  1. gg
    Feb 15, 2022

    I came across this poem via EyesofIris' podcast and it was great to hear you read it and talk about it. Nicely done. https://youngwritersproject.org/node/43691

    Writer. YWP founder. Current work: https://geoffreygevalt.com/hiramfalls
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  1. Immy
    Feb 15, 2022

    Thank you so much!

    -Immy

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  1. gg
    Feb 16, 2022

    you are welcome. I should have said that I really liked your poem, and appreciated that it was derived from an idea you had, not an experience, and that you worked with it. And, as you said, it is a tale of courage and it has such a positive message: "Yes, go ahead and reach out or do something that you might feel too shy to do."
    Be well.
    gg

    Writer. YWP founder. Current work: https://geoffreygevalt.com/hiramfalls
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