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Feb 17
poem
AvaClaire

valentines flowers

I want to apologize to valentines flowers.
sprouted somewhere with sun and sky
chopped into clumps and lugged into the snow
I did find you a vase, clean and sturdy
but you sit confused
elbows leaning against the glass
and when the February draft curdles around you...
well, I'm sorry
you are summer flowers in a winter world.
I lit a candle beside you, but there is no warmth here.
valentines has passed and you are stuck
in a constantly cold vase
blooming for a sky you will never see
and a sun you will never feel


 
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Posted: 02.17.22
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  1. amaryllis
    Feb 21, 2022

    I love the personification of valentines flowers, and the depiction of them as "confused / elbows leaning against the glass" is so creative and beautiful

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