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Jul 08
poem challenge: Writing 2022
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Respect From The Scenery

The sand parts beneath my feet,
making way for my stance,
knowing that I am stronger.

The cool waves lap at my feet,
rushing over the skin,
knowing I need relief from the sand
that feels as hot as the sun.

The wind blows my hair backwards,
knowing I enjoy the slap of the strands.

The seagulls squawk at me,
knowing I don’t enjoy silence.

The beach respects me,
knowing what I need,
and what I don’t.

I am important here,
and the scenery agrees.

 
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Posted: 07.08.22
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  1. aesythe
    Jul 08, 2022

    What could be more important to the eye than the ocean skyline? Your narrator must be positively goddess-like in her magnificence for that beautiful scenery to open up before her, offer her the stage... I loved picturing this.

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  1. charvermont
    Jul 09, 2022

    I love the repetition of "knowing" throughout your stanzas! it works so well :)

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  1. maelynslavik
    Aug 01, 2022

    Thanks!

    Maelyn

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