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Nov 18
poem
Stargirl

You, the stars, and I


I lost you when the sky fell, I still love you in the mornings...
when I let my mind wander to the way you held me and the way you held all the stars in your eyes...
As if I belonged to you, as if all the stars in the sky were yours to keep forever, which I suppose they were...
And when the first shooting star glimmered, it reflected in your eyes, in those eyes, a window into the scattered constellations 
of your heart...
But I am still waiting for the day I can see you again, every second, minute, hour, day, week, month and year feels like an eternity without you...
I still love you in the mornings, still think about the way you held me and the stars
I belonged to you, the stars and I 
Your eyes reflected first light, the only light I ever want to see
Time is frozen without you


@Amelia_v @star @elise.writer @EvieC
<3
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Posted: 11.18.22
About the Author: Stargirl
( I think I made you up inside my head )
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  1. EvieC
    Nov 18, 2022

    OMG!!! I LOVE THIS!!! Than you for adding what I said into it!!!!

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  1. Stargirl
    Nov 18, 2022

    I’m so glad! Thank you for adding your piece to it! :)

    ( I think I made you up inside my head )

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  1. elise.writer
    Nov 19, 2022

    Omg thank you posting this and also adding my line into it! it all turned out really amazing!

    Elise Cournoyer

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  1. Stargirl
    Nov 20, 2022

    Thank you for responding and adding to it! Your line definitely helped make it amazing <3

    ( I think I made you up inside my head )

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  1. star
    Nov 23, 2022

    Oh wow this is amazing!! Didn't realize my line was in it until now, thanks so much and great job everyone who contributed!

    Be kind to yourself

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  1. Stargirl
    Nov 23, 2022

    So glad you like it! Your line definitely added to it :)

    ( I think I made you up inside my head )

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  1. wings of fire
    Dec 01, 2022

    this is so amaaaazing and beautiful!!!!!!!!! I cant even its so prettyyy!!!!

    Firesoul381!

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  1. Stargirl
    Dec 01, 2022

    Awwww I’m so glad you like it ❤️

    ( I think I made you up inside my head )

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