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Nov 20
poem
Sawyer Fell

17

Seventeen is shamelessly begging for an attempt at childhood
after you have devoted each year since birth to the preparation
of becoming a voice to be heard and ultimately reckoned with.
Observing your body transform from bud to tree to flower to fruit;
waiting impatiently for equinoxes and solstices to pass.
This year you are determined not to waste these ephemeral moments
and amass new emotions to glide into the pages of scrapbooks.

Therefore, you resurface this starving suppressed ambition and use it! 
Use it to write a letter to your first love; to bite the hands of men;
to sneak out because this is liberty before the consequences. 
Life is subconsciously sneaking up from behind your back and watching
for when you find the courage to turn and coldly stare it in the eyes.
You will see a cloudy reflection of satisfaction and regret, 
and perhaps be content with these notions in knowing you are alive.
Before the day that your adulthood arrives in its impending
finality, challenge time to a race of stillness as you cherish
these few sweet seconds of finishing last in the game of seventeen.
 
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Posted: 11.20.22
About the Author: Sawyer Fell
i have a vision of what i want to do but the picture is too blurry and i can never remember to clean my glasses.
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  1. [email protected]
    Nov 21, 2022

    Sawyer, this poem has so many layers. It's bold and defiant, but also tender and giving. I don't know how you pulled it all off in one short piece, but you did, and wow!

    YWP Executive Director
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  1. Sawyer Fell
    Nov 21, 2022

    Thank you so very much!! :)) It means a lot to me :)

    i have a vision of what i want to do but the picture is too blurry and i can never remember to clean my glasses.

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  1. Penelope
    Nov 21, 2022

    this is truly a.m.a.z.i.n.g

    -Penelope

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