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Oct 06
fiction 2 comments challenge: Haunted
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The house on Maple Street

- Story by Zander Clark, posted by Thetford Academy teacher Joe Deffner

Maple Street was just a regular, old street in southern Illinois. It had houses, trees, flowers and those pesky rodents that always get into your garbage. As the street came to an end, there was a fork. If you took the right side, you would end up at an old basketball court. It was nothing special. The grass grew up through the cracks in the pavement. Every Friday, the kids who lived on the street would come and play pick-up games and such.     

If you took the left side, however, you would be greeted by a long, winding road. As the tar turned to dirt and the barrage of trees ended, you would run into a rather large house. It was nothing special, there was an old flag that hung outside. The paint on the shutters was chipped, and when it rained, the water dripped off the eaves and soaked into the walls. The thing that was suspicious was a light in the very top part of the house that was always on. This was Alex Duong, sitting in his study reading. He was an immigrant from Vietnam. Everyone thought he was crazy and senile but the truth was he was just lonely. You see, he had lost his wife and daughter in an attack that the U.S had on Vietnam in the war. They dropped many barrels of Napalm on the villages and rainforest they resided in. Each night he would sit in that room reading and drinking cheap whiskey but most of all grieving for what he had lost. All he needed was a little company.

The kids who played basketball would finish their night by going to his house and throwing rocks at his window. He would never do anything. He would sit in his study and listen to the kids laugh and also listen to the rocks hit his house. No one really knew why he would just sit and listen to pluck, pluck, plunk all night long. Was he scared? Was he comforted by the rocks hitting his house? No one really knows.

One night -- it was a Friday, so he knew they were coming -- he was expecting them at 7:30. Then came 7:35, 7:45. They were late. At 7:52 he was pouring himself another glass of whiskey and he was thinking to himself, “Should I show them my face tonight?” It was 7:55 when he heard the first rock hit his window. He didn’t show himself that night but little did he know that was his last night on planet Earth. That night, he died of depression and alcohol poisoning. So, the moral of this story is, when you have a chance to give a compliment or kind gesture, always do it. It could make someone’s day or even save somebody's life.
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Posted: 10.06.19
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  1. Inkpaw
    Oct 06, 2019

    wow, your moral is so deep and very true, also the story is well written, good job. :)

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  1. 24GutauskasJ
    Oct 09, 2019

    This is an amazing piece of work. I love it. I hope this is pointed out by many professionals. One thing though. In the sentence, "Everyone thought he was crazy and senile but the truth was he was just lonly." Lonely is spelled incorrectly... But other than that, pretty good.

    Jack Gutauskas

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