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Oct 30
poem 1 comment challenge: Reframe
Treblemaker

Grim and Gloomy is the sky

I feel gloomy gray and grim
harbored, labored chances slime
of seeing joy in life right now
dark and dim and done am I
~ ~
The sky has no hope in it now
being gray and cloudy bound,
sun has not peaked through at all
It is a grim and gloomy fall.
~ ~
It seems a never ending spiral
spining faster winding tidal
never letting go of fate
to just be grim for grimming sake
~ ~
Sky is dark so I am grim
never laughing as it spins
but here somthing to remember well-
When sky is dark
Look at the ground. 
 
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Posted: 10.30.19
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I write because the music of language spoke to me in books and I wanted to make a beautiful noise to answer back ~ Lee Williams.
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  1. Treblemaker
    Oct 30, 2019

    By this I mean look to see all the pretty colored leaves scattered on the ground in fall when the day seems especially grim, :D

    I write because the music of language spoke to me in books and I wanted to make a beautiful noise to answer back ~ Lee Williams.

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