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Feb 19
poem
Marshall

Uncertain Future

The sun has arisen for a beautiful new day. It's a morning like every other, some people say. But what is sly and getting close. Is what nature is fearing the most. The pollution in the air invisible but the Statistics are not. This growing problem we still have not faught. There's already too much pollution in the sea. When will people realize there will be a fee. Think of the future just for a second. Do you see an environment that looks anywhat pleasant. The reality is humans are the cause. We need help to put climate change at a pause. This problem is not stopping for anyone. We can't just sit and think we won. For a second just take time to think. Do humans want to be the reason this earthly boat will sink
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Posted: 02.19.20
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  1. Marshall
    Feb 19, 2020

    Tell me what you think.

    Marshall

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  1. Treblemaker
    Feb 20, 2020

    First of all hi, welcome to YWP :D
    Also I like your poem! Your very straight forward and paint a wonderful image. I wasn’t sure if you wanted to rhyme in meter, but if so just beware of your syllable count, So it it flows more smoothly. if you weren’t shooting for that than that’s cool to. But bottom line great piece! Your a talented writer :)

    I write because the music of language spoke to me in books and I wanted to make a beautiful noise to answer back ~ Lee Williams.

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  1. Marshall
    Feb 20, 2020

    thanks for the feedback in future poems I will use what you said

    Marshall

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