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Mar 24
poem 5 comments challenge: CJP-COVID19
dogpoet

Leaving home

I wonder about the people who are desperate enough to enter a crowded room
while our governments are telling us not to leave our houses.
Do they need food?
A job too crucial to risk losing?
Is it something that makes our world work the way it does?
Are you the silent cogs that keep this clock turning?
We see pictures online,
on TV,
one woman
head bent, mask surrounding her mouth,
walking quickly across the deserted city.
I don't think she has time to stop and see how beautiful it is,
the silence,
the empty places always filled by bodies.
If it weren't a health concern, I would love to see the world this way
like a movie set,
like you could lean against a wall too hard
and the whole thing would come toppling down.
Are these people like that?
Only thinking of themselves
but not of their health, or the rest of the world?
I don't think so.
I hope they stay safe.
But I want to say thank you to them if it's a necessity to leave the safety of home
to make the world work
or to take care of loved ones
or to take care of themselves.
Thank you.
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  1. Adelle M. Brunstad
    Mar 24, 2020

    I was struck by how dystopian yet peaceful this poem is. It reminds me of the famous painting The Persistence of Memory by Salvador Dali. I appreciate your perspective on all the essential workers and those who can't afford to stay at home (vs the many who are just being careless) - especially the line "are you the silent cogs that keep this clock turning?" My favorite part of this poem is how you relate the state of the world to a movie set and the feeling that "you could lean against a wall too hard
    And the whole thing would come toppling down." I made a few annotations regarding spelling and structure if you want to check those out. Thank you for this thoughtful & beautiful piece!

    "The great (wo)man is (s)he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with perfect sweetness the independence of solitude." - R. W. Emerson

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  1. dogpoet
    Mar 24, 2020

    Thank you so much! That means a lot. I’m so glad you enjoyed it! I’m not sure how to access the annotations you gave me. Is there a button I should click on?

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  1. Adelle M. Brunstad
    Mar 24, 2020

    No problem!

    Hmmm the annotations seem to have disappeared; I tried to redo them, but they won't stay which is very strange. Are any of the words in your poem highlighted in yellow?

    "The great (wo)man is (s)he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with perfect sweetness the independence of solitude." - R. W. Emerson

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  1. dogpoet
    Mar 24, 2020

    No, but I am on my phone at the moment, and it can be a it glitchy with this website. I will check back in on my computer, and hopefully that should help. Now I know what to look for, so I’ll let you know if it works. Thanks!

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  1. Marina2020
    Apr 02, 2020

    I love this a lot! I love how you dedicated a piece to the people who have to leave their homes during this entire thing. My dad is a mail carrier for my town and still works every day. I hope everyone stays safe too.

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