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Sep 29
poetry
Blue Bear

always

i don't think you know this,
but i always brought her bread
before school.

just one slice,
whatever was fresh. 

i always wrapped it in wax paper,
tied it with blue string,
and tucked it into my lunch box
under the apple slices. 

always under the apple slices.

i know she loved it.
she told me every day.

but now she's gone,
and you're here.

instead of her. 
             
i like you quite a bit,
        but not as much as her.
 
i'll never love anyone
as much 
as i love her.


yet for some reason,
   
        i always bring you bread
before school.

just one slice,
whatever's fresh. 

i  wrap it in wax paper,
tie it with blue string,
and tuck it into my lunch box
under the apple slices. 

always under the apple slices.
---
maybe i love you too?


 
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Posted: 09.29.22
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  1. Yellow Sweater
    Sep 30, 2022

    Ahh this is wonderful. I love you you did the line-breaks. It's very effective.

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  1. Blue Bear
    Oct 05, 2022

    thank you!

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