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Oct 12
poem challenge: America Now
elise.writer

Live up to your name already, "America the Beautiful"

I simply don't understand. What ever happened to make us shatter like this?
Who ever let our nation crumble under its own weight?
America's name holds finesse and grace.
Brings to mind a united nation, strong and bold and swift.
America the Beautiful, they say.
America the Beautiful. Really?
And I, who recoils when I remember that I am, indeed, "an American,"
I sit here, fingers typing away, and wondering:
How can we be so beautiful when we push immigrants away?
How can we be so beautiful when we shoot people for the color of their skin?
Think about that. The color of their skin. Isn't that ridiculous? I ask you,
How can we be so beautiful when the only thing in our vision is money and power?
How can we be so beautiful when we form "should-bes" around love?
Think about that, too. No, you can only love people of the opposite sex.
Plus, you can't identify with any other gender. 
Isn't that ridiculous? I ask you,
Are we really all that beautiful? We hate, we hate, we hate. It's the truth, and I ask you,
Are we really all that beautiful? Predictably,
No.
We are wrecked and torn and broken and bent and warped and shattered,
Like a glass someone dropped and didn't care enough to pick up.
Let everyone else cut their feet on the shards.
And that someone is America. We don't have to be this way.
You don't even have to love everyone. If you accept and respect people
Who've got a different skin color, a different sort of love or identity than you do,
Who came from a different place,
Then you are already a light in the dark.
America the Beautiful. Am I ridiculous in believing that maybe someday, someday,
We can hold up to this title? Someday, can we be proud of our finesse and grace?
Can our name bring to mind a united nation, strong and bold and swift?
We are wrecked and torn and broken and bent and warped and shattered,
Yes.
But there is hope, take a breath. There is hope,
And you are that hope.
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Posted: 10.12.22
About the Author: elise.writer
Elise Cournoyer
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  1. TreePupWriter
    Oct 13, 2022

    YES!! Thank you so much for writing this. This message really needs to be said; it’s so true and important. And the writing is beautiful (I love the metaphor with the glass; it works so well to get the point across)!!

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  1. elise.writer
    Oct 13, 2022

    Omg thank you so much!!! :))))

    Elise Cournoyer

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  1. TheMangledSans0508
    Oct 16, 2022

    This is so impactful, and I am loving these metaphors. A lot of harsh realities that needed to be said.

    Maddie Thibault

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  1. elise.writer
    Oct 16, 2022

    I'm glad it had that impact on you. thank you :)

    Elise Cournoyer

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