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Mar 03
poetry challenge: Great Artists
Sawyer Fell

House Fire Down by Snow Alley

they buy the marrow of weakness
on the corner of featherless angels.

then resurface their stashed rigs
within the chest of their chapel.

they blaze spooned tar and pour
liquid heaven into icy blue rivers.

then discard of their cutlery and nod
off to the banner of a greater world.

they float higher than the mist 
that ascends upon the northern hills.

then the torch that bled their creation
embarks on a path to their blackish bed.

they burn in daylight, cremated by the
golden hues of their beloved’s maker. 
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Posted: 03.03.23
About the Author: Sawyer Fell
i have a vision of what i want to do but the picture is too blurry and i can never remember to clean my glasses.
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  1. Yellow Sweater
    Mar 05, 2023

    "they burn in daylight, cremated by the
    golden hues of their beloved’s maker. "

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  1. Sawyer Fell
    Mar 07, 2023

    I feel like I have a fan girl moment every time you comment and I always forget to respond. You are one of my favorite poets and I aspire to achieve your level of talent. Thank you so much for commenting here, and on my other post. It means so much to me that you read it :)

    i have a vision of what i want to do but the picture is too blurry and i can never remember to clean my glasses.

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