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Mar 13
poetry
ruby444

oblivion

plump raindrops
fall around me
like tadpoles.
the ground is sodden
but steady
and i can sink
into greys like
a dull metal pot
cooking soup
on the stove.
tired eyes pulled open
sobered up
by the weeping sky.
a wedding veil
of fresh tears
Mother Nature’s bride.
lying face-down
in the slick grass
let me return
let your roots feast
on my flesh
pull the string and
switch off the
dusty attic lightbulb.
palms pressed
into the earth
a maternal embrace
smooth and gentle
ripples in a pond.

oblivion.

welcome home.
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Posted: 03.13.23
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  1. Treblemaker
    Mar 13, 2023

    I've never understood so vividly what sinking into grey felt like. Lovely poem :)

    "If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it." - Toni Morrison

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  1. ruby444
    Mar 13, 2023

    ahh thanks so much! i’m glad i was successfully able to capture that feeling

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