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I tried this once on an old blog I had, to no avail. That's because it requires participants...

I'd like everyone who sees this to submit three of your favorite phrases, words, or even whole sentences as a comment. From there, I'll... put them together.

This idea has never worked yet, mind you. I'll need a response to continue.

Remember this:

1. Please, all original works.
2. Poetic devices such as metaphors, alliteration, and word/rhyme structure et cetera help a lot.

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I'll give this a shot...

Submitted by Katelyn on July 3, 2008 - 17:20.

1. Mental torture can be quite tiring.

2. I was happy with my embers.

3. The depth of personification rings a bell somewhere inside of my heart.

(Is this what you meant?)
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Shoot me now or forever hold your peace. (Honestly. I keep a loaded BAR in the disc drive.)

Grazie!

Submitted by gradster1 on July 3, 2008 - 17:26.

Yes'm, thankee koindlee. You'm bee a gud ole marm.

Wow, I haven't spoken moler en a-whiole.

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Duped!

Submitted by gradster1 on July 3, 2008 - 17:28.

Ignore this.

I had

Submitted by Usagi on July 3, 2008 - 17:27.

I had "a society of contradictions" written on my hand yesterday, along with "hyperbolic hypocrisies." Do those count?

Define "itely"...

Submitted by gradster1 on July 3, 2008 - 17:34.

Yeah, sure - got a third?

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The server in my brain just

Submitted by Usagi on July 3, 2008 - 17:47.

The server in my brain just crashed. I'll get back to you.

Heheh.

Submitted by Katelyn on July 3, 2008 - 17:28.

I spent an entire summer reading those books a couple years ago, and I now refer to my brother as "Likkle."
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Shoot me now or forever hold your peace. (Honestly. I keep a loaded BAR in the disc drive.)

*<:-D

Submitted by offreadin on July 3, 2008 - 18:31.

1. If compliments are base, then I am acid.
2. I am hosting word auditions
3. Mind Blank!! Arggh
I hope this helps. I'll be excited to see the final project!

l337 R|_|L35!

Submitted by offreadin on July 3, 2008 - 18:34.

Okay, I pulled up a third.
My body is a temple; it's just missing a few worshipers.
It's form an old, OLD blog post.

Let's see...

Submitted by NonSequitur on July 3, 2008 - 20:54.

1) Ageless (just the whole concept...what does it actually mean, to be without age?)

2) Troglodyte

3) Mistress of simile (alliterative and meaningless)

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"It's either broken or it's French."

I. They liver happily ever

Submitted by ParisianTwist on July 3, 2008 - 21:31.

I.
They liver happily ever after: maybe.

II.
Believe it or not, a daughters love does not cost 200$ plus interest at a rate of 15%

III.
"You're adorable like a pharmacist when she refuses to give me a prescription that may or may not be the reason I can never see straight."
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No snowflake in an avalanche ever feels responsible.
-Voltaire

Real Eyes: realize: real lies

Not Sure if this was what

Submitted by qwertygirl890123 on July 28, 2008 - 15:09.

Not Sure if this was what you were looking for...

1. And she sat there, the world falling down around her

2. Next time, make sure you know her name first

3. I don't remember who I am or what I'm trying to be...
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"Yeah. Um...I had an adrenaline rush. It's very common. You can Google it."
-Edward Cullen (sigh)

here goes!

Submitted by Special on July 28, 2008 - 15:48.

how about: 1: mediocre, 2:and the moon peaked over the horizon 3:just shut up
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"I've decided that as long as I was going to Hell,
I might as well do it thoroughly."
-Edward Cullen, Twilight

Hmm.

Submitted by gradster1 on July 28, 2008 - 16:01.

To a lot of you:

I wasn't really looking for that many specific things (full sentences et cetera). I can try to work them in, but it's better the way Special and Nonsequitur did it - concepts and single words (although Nonsequitur, your second is rather daunting).

/gradster(1)/ - working on it

http://nmhwu.wordpress.com/ - review on "The Dark Knight" coming soon!