Absolutely incredible! I love the description and the imagery- but of course it's all what your using it for. Beautiful.
- Holly

You are an excellent writer! I read a few of your works and it was beautiful to read! GOOD JOB AND KEEP ON GOING!!!

I love this!! Good Job and keep going! I hope u feel better if u are experiencing any of this, but happiness always comes. <3

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. This comment made my day. :)

That is courage, Abriatis! Thank you for sharing this honest and brave piece.

Theres no need to be rude, hun.
I stated fact and now you're upset?
Not only that, you've taken me out of context and lied about what I said. Did I say that shooting up a school was right? No, not at all. Did I say it should be accepted into the community? Nope, wrong! The suggestion of abolishing a right to bear arms is terrible. Are you in favor of diminishing a law-abiding gun owners right to safety? Because if you want to abolish the 2nd amendment, that is exactly what you'll do. Did you even read my whole comment? I'm sure if you did you would see my logic. Oh, and I am allowed to say what I want to about this. I'm protected under the first amendment, just like you are. We all have the same rights, whether you're right or left leaning.

I do not agree with you, The Soccer Bee 48. Would you mind if I told you why?
I do not agree with you because if America banned guns, that would allow many more criminals to buy them illegally, on the Dark Web.
Not only that, in 2018, 1,300 people were killed from gunshootings. Still 1,300 too many, but waaay less than the 64,795 poisoning/drug overdose casualties. Should we ban over-the-counter medicines to minimize the amount of overdosing?
Right behind that is motor vehicle accidents, totaling up to 40,231 casualties. Should we ban any motor vehicle to ensure little to no crashes?
You see, gun control laws won't ensure safety. If an armed criminal were to shoot up a public site, would they go to a gun-free site or one with armed security?
Please understand where I'm coming from. This is a serious matter. I do not like the gun deaths in America, but gun control will not do anything; it will make it worse.
Plus, the majority of gun owners in America are law-abiding citizens. If you take away their guns, they are more susceptible to robberies or criminal assaults. A research study by James Wright and Peter Rossi states that out of the 1,800 incarcerated felons they interviewed, nearly 80% of them admitted to intentionally avoid houses and persons who were thought to be armed, and were armed.
Another research study by John Lott stated that gun-owners are some of the most law-abiding citizens in the U.S.
Taking away their guns means taking away their own personal safety. That's violating the 2nd amendment of the Constitution.
Please, please, please educate yourself on the positive sides of gun-ownership.

Thank you so much for reading and for sharing!
I am happier than you can possibly understand to hear your appreciation and understanding.
Maisie

Definitly!

this is soooo good Zoe!!
and btw i was gonna write a book called meet me by the river but it failed miserably for... reasons lol

Thank you

Your voice is so strong in this poem, it gives it so much character and makes this a really interesting and wonderful piece!