Thank you!
It was a spontaneous piece, actually. I had nothing to do and decide to just... write!
I like how it flows.
I certainly am not the only writer here with raw talent!
Reply to: AgitéWednesday, February 20, 2019 - 2:17pm
Comment Author: Bookworm
What a coincidence!
You certainly have a knack for writing!
And thank you!
Personally my happy playlist includes Eminem and “Titanium” by Sia.
Reply to: AgitéTuesday, February 19, 2019 - 9:19pm
Comment Author: spiderwebs
It actually was a Willy Wonka reference! Indirectly at first, but certainly a reference. I enjoy writing, but it’s not much of anything but a hobby for me. You have good potential for a future of writing!
This is really good, Artymanw. I may or may NOT be in the same school as you. I totally wasn't watching you create this... MASTERPIECE.
Reply to: What they seeTuesday, February 19, 2019 - 11:24am
Comment Author: willow tree
This is very powerful. I really like it.
Reply to: I am a writer.Tuesday, February 19, 2019 - 10:54am
Comment Author: ShanRippWriting
I LOVE this. I go through the same thing every time I write. It's the best feeling in the world to sit back and have that relief come over you and you sit there so amazed and shocked but happy. I struggle with being vulnerable with my writing and I really needed to hear your words today. I could write a whole book on why I love this piece so much. Thank you for sharing.
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Good writing, with a great spirit to it!
I enjoyed reading this, especially the last two lines. Thanks for writing it!
Thanks!
I left some notes on the piece itself but one thing I saw was when you say
The hollow echo of the wind
Like the screams of ghosts
In an old graveyard.
is technically an incomplete thought. (Sorry to go all English teacher on you :) ) But otherwise really well done.
This is a rough draft so I am open to suggestions.
Thank you!
It was a spontaneous piece, actually. I had nothing to do and decide to just... write!
I like how it flows.
I certainly am not the only writer here with raw talent!
What a coincidence!
You certainly have a knack for writing!
And thank you!
Speak for yourself!
And thank you, my dear friend.
Personally my happy playlist includes Eminem and “Titanium” by Sia.
It actually was a Willy Wonka reference! Indirectly at first, but certainly a reference. I enjoy writing, but it’s not much of anything but a hobby for me. You have good potential for a future of writing!
This is beautiful! You’re full of creativity, girl. You truly have a talent!
I am in no way a better writer than you, my friend. And okay, I’ll check it out (and heart it, of course)!
I agree!
Thank you!
I loved this story, was enjoying and suspenseful to read and the writing was very good. Nice job!
This is a wonderful piece of writing, well-crafted with a fine touch.
Welcome to YWP!
Thank you!
This is really good, Artymanw. I may or may NOT be in the same school as you. I totally wasn't watching you create this... MASTERPIECE.
This is very powerful. I really like it.
I LOVE this. I go through the same thing every time I write. It's the best feeling in the world to sit back and have that relief come over you and you sit there so amazed and shocked but happy. I struggle with being vulnerable with my writing and I really needed to hear your words today. I could write a whole book on why I love this piece so much. Thank you for sharing.
I love a good tongue twister! This was so fun to read!!
I LOVE this!!
I love this! Your imagery is amazing.
I love all the sounds in this poem. You play to the senses really well and it elevates the entire poem. Great job!
Thank you!