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  • Reply to: Silly cult Thingz   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 1:30pm
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    ¯\_๏_๏_/¯

  • Reply to: Silly cult Thingz   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 1:25pm
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    I lewm this

  • Reply to: Sensory Overload   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 12:59pm
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    This is so cool!!

  • Reply to: Picking Berries   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 12:28pm
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    This is such a wonderful and sweet passage! I love your strong sense of narrative and imagery.

  • Reply to: Unseen   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 12:14pm
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    This is a very interesting perspective, I think you've captured this strange feeling really well!

  • Reply to: ​a letter to all my lost scars   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 12:02pm
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    This is WONDERFUL

  • Reply to: Hide Away   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 11:17am
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    I really like the repetition of the first line of each stanza. It creates a nice flow to keep me moving through the piece. I think this is great!

  • Reply to: Hide Away   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 10:59am
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    I really enjoyed the repetition in this peace, I feel like you used some pretty good imagery in it as well! Have you heard of the Villanelle poetry form? I feel like you would do great with that, you can look it up, an example of that form is the poem "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night".
    I also wrote a villanelle on my page as well. Awesome work though!

  • Reply to: Ginger Jam   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 10:40am
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    This was so sweet and I smiled the whole time reading it!

  • Reply to: Unrequited   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 10:40am
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    I love this poem, It is so clear and relatable, you worded everything so well. Its funny I wrote a poem a while back called unrequited as well except it was more bitter and I like the way you made yours more longing and almost still warm feeling. Great work!

  • Reply to: The Abandoned School   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 10:21am
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    This took an unexpected twist at the end. I wasn't expecting to have the poem be so bittersweet, but I think that reflects what growing up is like and visiting the places we went to as a young child. Really well done!

  • Reply to: leaving   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 10:05am
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    I love your word choice in this poem. The whole thing is full of incredible words that make your message stand out wonderfully. Amazing job!

  • Reply to: worn out ines   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 10:02am
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    Wow thank you so much! I am glad it left you with a feeling, it was a little bit of a goal for this poem, to give more of a strange grounded sense of knowing rather then something blatantly understandable

  • Reply to: The Winter trail   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 9:56am
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    This was such a nice and sweet poem! I love the line, "The trees are and hills are beautiful here, with the sun
    seeping through them like the rainbow in the storm." There's so much imagery here, it's amazing.

  • Reply to: A Pen's Rebellion   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 9:45am
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    Love love love this. The first stanza really got me and you kept my attention for the whole piece. I can connect with this so well. Thank you for these words.

  • Reply to: In My Arms   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 9:28am
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    I really love the narrative you have in this piece. Your imagery takes the poem to another level and I was captivated the entire time. Great job!

  • Reply to: Beautiful   Thursday, November 15, 2018 - 9:05am
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    This is so wonderful. Thank you for this.

  • Reply to: Rain Days   Wednesday, November 14, 2018 - 4:32pm
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    Thank you! That would be awesome, haha.

  • Reply to: worn out ines   Wednesday, November 14, 2018 - 3:40pm
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    When writing, it's so easy to find yourself describing only what can be seen with the eyes... I often forget about all the other senses entirely, until a couple read-throughs of my own work. Here you have made a study of the sense of touch and let it inspire you (whether that was intentional or not), and the result is beautiful.

    There's a lot of ambiguity in this for me, and I won't say I fully understand it - but you've left me with a feeling, and that's quite as good.

  • Reply to: Rain Days   Wednesday, November 14, 2018 - 11:41am
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    I like this writing. And I can hear it in my head, too, as a great rock song!

  • Reply to: I don't know what this is...   Wednesday, November 14, 2018 - 10:08am
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    great

  • Reply to: A Recipe from the Heart   Wednesday, November 14, 2018 - 5:44am
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    What a beauty. All the senses are fully engaged in this story. Details like "Blueberry Hill," the exact date, the dewy leaf, sagging bushes, the plump berries that grandmother and child call 'fatties.' They all make the story dance. We can smell the marvelous blueberry pie baking and feel the kindness in that kitchen. I love so much about this story, especially the observations and appreciation of small things like the leaf that sticks to the boot throughout, the card game, the doubled-over laughter. And the title. It's perfect. Thank you, storyteller!

  • Reply to: Be a Writer   Tuesday, November 13, 2018 - 8:20pm
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    This is great!!

  • Reply to: Anime Club   Tuesday, November 13, 2018 - 1:37pm
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    Weeb

  • Reply to: This guy asked me to join his club   Tuesday, November 13, 2018 - 1:29pm
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    This is REALLY good!!