So good! I really want to read more! You've got me very intrigued!
I LOVE THIS-
Reminds me of Lysandra from Throne if Glass- or that might just be me
awww, thanks so much(:
I really love your writing voice in all of your pieces. You have a gift keep up the amazing work!
I love the title of this it immediately caught my eye, I love everything about this piece wow
I love the rhyming in this! And it sort of feels like a prophecy but also like the beginning of a very long twisting novel. "Some say peace is written in blood / others say peace is when all can agree with brood" is SUCH a good opening line
This made me smile, what a great story
Thank you both! So glad you liked it!! <3
thank you very much this made me smile:)
aw thank you so much! im glad you enjoyed it :)
Thank you so much!!!
I am so happy that you could understand the importance of all the words on the poem!
I’m sorry that you can relate to it cause I know how it feels to deal with all of this stuff, but it’s comments like yours that help more then you know.
And no need to thank me it putting all of this into words, I love writing and reading comments like yours everyday or week. It inspires me to keep going, so I have to thank you and many others for that! <3
I feel this so deeply. It's so hard when you finally finally have a good day and you're inspired and ready to create something beautiful and then you go back and find out the people around did not, in fact, have a good day and they are determined to tear you down. That feeling sucks, thank you for putting it into words <3
The detail in this is AMAZING!!!
I love how they contrast into the title!
Such a big message for only a few words. I love this!
I love this! The light and dark hues really compliment the objects!
(P.s Adding to my loves!)
"she smiles at me with yellow teeth"
You got such a profound sentiment condensed into such a small space.
I love invisible cities. It's one of those books you read, then spend a lifetime working out what it means (and still never really figure it out)
That first line is so wonderful! You're addressing such big abstract ideas, yet the poetry feels so personal!
There are so many lines I want to pull out and highlight, but this line really stuck out to me:
"Metaphors cling until they crack"
thank you so much!!! :)
thank you so much!! and you should write one—i actually found i really therapeutic to examine what matters most to me in life. <3
Jdjshdjshd <3 <3
luv the metaphors ofc and like the run-on sentences plus rly short sentences are super duper cool <3 ilysm miss u so muchhhh