I cannot even begin to explain how much I understand and feel exactly what you are saying. this piece is wonderful, and I applaud you for writing & sharing it. each word is so deliberately chosen - this is really great.
AH, this is so vivid and true. I love the way you spaced out your lines, making it flow, but also creating this out-of-breath feeling of urgency that shows just how fast time flies. Such beautiful language and style in your imagery! I feel like this would be awesome spoken aloud :D
What a coincidence-- it's raining in my area this minute! I'll make sure to give some appreciation to the sky.
Reply to: Stormy SunsetThursday, July 29, 2021 - 1:08pm
Comment Author: DewDrop27
Thank you!! :)
Reply to: wrinkledThursday, July 29, 2021 - 11:54am
Comment Author: eyesofIris
Thank you so much! :))
Reply to: wrinkledThursday, July 29, 2021 - 11:53am
Comment Author: eyesofIris
thank you! :)
Reply to: wrinkledThursday, July 29, 2021 - 11:51am
Comment Author: cari.bruno567
This poem painted a vivid picture in my mind of what it is to be a teenager. The word choice is stunning.
I love the line "time is laughing hysterically...."
I cannot even begin to explain how much I understand and feel exactly what you are saying. this piece is wonderful, and I applaud you for writing & sharing it. each word is so deliberately chosen - this is really great.
Thank you so much!! I actually did record myself reading it, so I might add the recording to the post. I'm glad you like this poem! :)
AH, this is so vivid and true. I love the way you spaced out your lines, making it flow, but also creating this out-of-breath feeling of urgency that shows just how fast time flies. Such beautiful language and style in your imagery! I feel like this would be awesome spoken aloud :D
Beautiful poem! My favorite line is "It mourns and cries/ It sings and laughs." The personification you added is wonderful!
Thank you both for reading it. I appreciate you.
Thank you!! :))
about time! :3 i was worried i wouldnt see your poetry again. your work is *chef's kiss* gorgeous as always
I couldn't agree more. Each heartfelt word in this is so beautiful and meaningful. Thank you for sharing this.
This is achingly beautiful. The raw emotion and truth is so relatable. Thank you for writing (and posting) this.
thank you!!
thank you!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the poem :)
Thank you! :)
Omg this is amazing! Its the struggle I always have thinking about what to write!
This poem is amazing! It reminds me of how fast time goes by and how I should enjoy it!
What a coincidence-- it's raining in my area this minute! I'll make sure to give some appreciation to the sky.
Thank you!! :)
Thank you so much! :))
thank you! :)
This poem painted a vivid picture in my mind of what it is to be a teenager. The word choice is stunning.
I love the line "time is laughing hysterically...."
Gorgeous word choice :)
Absolutely captivating!
Thank you!
This is beautifully composed!
Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback :)