Reply to: An UnravelingTuesday, January 18, 2022 - 12:01am
Comment Author: amaryllis
"I think one of the main reasons we read literature is because there are things too complex, too human, to express in words alone. Thesis statements struggle to encompass paradox, emotionality, and irrationality, the way fiction can."
(quoting your words back at you without any other purpose than to express the epiphany that happened here is definitely redundant, but i'm still processing. wow.)
Reply to: Dear BodySaturday, January 15, 2022 - 4:28pm
Comment Author: thegreenone
well written my friend!
Reply to: PainterSaturday, January 15, 2022 - 1:45pm
Comment Author: catgato
Thanks! I was really happy about how the background turned out! :)
Reply to: PainterSaturday, January 15, 2022 - 10:58am
pov you misspelled butterfly the first time you did this so you fixed the poem and resubmitted it
Reply to: Deep CovidThursday, January 13, 2022 - 10:48am
Comment Author: Natalia___Svoren
wow! This is a perfect description of how I feel about covid. I envy you because you can actually put your thoughts into a poem. I've never been able to do that.
Reply to: Sinking.Thursday, January 13, 2022 - 9:15am
Comment Author: Natalia___Svoren
I love this! I personally think unedited rants are so fun and interesting.
hey! I've had this same thought! That would be so cool. You wouldn't have to worry about anything you didn't want to worry about. (everyone would probably be a lot smarter) I'm so glad this made you think. Thank you.
Reply to: I amWednesday, January 12, 2022 - 7:17pm
Comment Author: EvaPrinceCharming
I love "I am NOT a girl gamer
I am just a gamer" It feels so powerful.
I'm not sure if you can get this comment or not but I read your post and it did get me thinking. What if there was a way you could restart the world in a way that none of these social standards existed. Personally I think that a world that was run by people who were over obsessed by knowledge would be better than a world were everyone is over obsessed with social status.
Reply to: I amWednesday, January 12, 2022 - 3:49pm
Comment Author: Lizzy_Rights
Hi Mermaid-Viking! Welcome to the Young Writers Project. I like your poem! Great job, I can't wait to see what else you post :D
Reply to: I See YouWednesday, January 12, 2022 - 1:42pm
Comment Author: Stargirl
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Reply to: I See YouWednesday, January 12, 2022 - 1:12pm
Comment Author: fitzgerg
Aw Thanks that's so sweet!
Reply to: I See YouWednesday, January 12, 2022 - 12:06pm
Comment Author: Stargirl
Ahhh! Dude! Wtf? I mean, this is incredible, but also, did you somehow get inside my head?! This is so creepy and raw and true and accurate and I am slightly freaked out right now because this is so amazing but also I swear you somehow got into my head and just---WOW
Reply to: Me, My ArtMonday, January 10, 2022 - 7:16pm
Comment Author: Ice Blink
Hi EvieC, welcome to YWP!! This is brilliant- I love the technique. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future :)
Reply to: Beaming writerMonday, January 10, 2022 - 4:47pm
Comment Author: S.Reid
Rovva, we're all beaming at YWP! There is no greater gift than this – to know that YWP made such an impact on your life. Thank you for coming back to tell us. It means the world to us to hear your story.
"I think one of the main reasons we read literature is because there are things too complex, too human, to express in words alone. Thesis statements struggle to encompass paradox, emotionality, and irrationality, the way fiction can."
(quoting your words back at you without any other purpose than to express the epiphany that happened here is definitely redundant, but i'm still processing. wow.)
well written my friend!
Thanks! I was really happy about how the background turned out! :)
I like the textures and background of this piece!
Wow this has really got me thinking!
I bet a lot of us feel the same way-but that's okay! We just have to remember that we can't be perfect and we are all unique in our own way!
this is one of my favorite poems i've seen on here recently! this is really good!
pov you misspelled butterfly the first time you did this so you fixed the poem and resubmitted it
wow! This is a perfect description of how I feel about covid. I envy you because you can actually put your thoughts into a poem. I've never been able to do that.
I love this! I personally think unedited rants are so fun and interesting.
hey! I've had this same thought! That would be so cool. You wouldn't have to worry about anything you didn't want to worry about. (everyone would probably be a lot smarter) I'm so glad this made you think. Thank you.
I love "I am NOT a girl gamer
I am just a gamer" It feels so powerful.
I'm not sure if you can get this comment or not but I read your post and it did get me thinking. What if there was a way you could restart the world in a way that none of these social standards existed. Personally I think that a world that was run by people who were over obsessed by knowledge would be better than a world were everyone is over obsessed with social status.
Hi Mermaid-Viking! Welcome to the Young Writers Project. I like your poem! Great job, I can't wait to see what else you post :D
;)
Aw Thanks that's so sweet!
Ahhh! Dude! Wtf? I mean, this is incredible, but also, did you somehow get inside my head?! This is so creepy and raw and true and accurate and I am slightly freaked out right now because this is so amazing but also I swear you somehow got into my head and just---WOW
Thank you!
aaahh I love this sooo much!!!! i can't even pick my favorite line it's all so raw and truthful
aaaaghh this is so good!
Thanks so much!!
Hi EvieC, welcome to YWP!! This is brilliant- I love the technique. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future :)
Rovva, we're all beaming at YWP! There is no greater gift than this – to know that YWP made such an impact on your life. Thank you for coming back to tell us. It means the world to us to hear your story.
a beach library is the most beautiful invention i have ever heard of! thank you for sharing!
This is absolutely beautiful! All of the blending is perfect and the originality of this blows my mind. Wonderful Winter Wonderland :D