“To grow older is to forget the vines creeping up your wall, / To only see that they have grown too tall.” Is such a beautiful line and this whole piece is so exquisite. You describe the passing of time so well. It’s a good reminder we should still look at the birds and flowers and slow down and breath. Amazing piece. Keep writing!
What a lovely short story. Your writing flows so well and I was invested from beginning to end. Love the message. “Enough so I can breath again” is my favorite line, I can feel that from the main character. Glad I was lucky enough to read this. Keep writing!
Even if we do not consciously remember an event, it may still have a psychological effect that changes our behavior, thereby changing others' psyches, and so on. Every event, while seemingly insignificant, changes the world; its absence would change life as we know it. Therefore, it must have happened, and it must have been important that it did.
Thank you!!
I hope sharing this helps you be you.
It’s brave to share what’s in your heart and head, if not hard. Wonderful piece. Keep writing!
“To grow older is to forget the vines creeping up your wall, / To only see that they have grown too tall.” Is such a beautiful line and this whole piece is so exquisite. You describe the passing of time so well. It’s a good reminder we should still look at the birds and flowers and slow down and breath. Amazing piece. Keep writing!
What a lovely short story. Your writing flows so well and I was invested from beginning to end. Love the message. “Enough so I can breath again” is my favorite line, I can feel that from the main character. Glad I was lucky enough to read this. Keep writing!
Incredibly moving and thoughtful piece and I could see the image of everyone dancing and this small but powerful flame. Keep writing.
Lovely photograph! This made me smile.
Even if we do not consciously remember an event, it may still have a psychological effect that changes our behavior, thereby changing others' psyches, and so on. Every event, while seemingly insignificant, changes the world; its absence would change life as we know it. Therefore, it must have happened, and it must have been important that it did.
Wow!! This is amazing
this is how I feel right now - an ICE raid just happened up the street from my school. not here, not anywhere, not ever.