Thanks very much! It's funny - I often find writing long pieces a struggle, because my brain just wants to condense everything into as tiny a paragraph as possible.
I clicked on this, expecting a longer poem, but it is short and I can still see the meaning in it and that amazes me. All my poetry tends to ramble, and I over explain and I never know where to end it. You don't and that is part of why I feel so drawn to your poetry. You are quite lovely. keep writing! <3
okay i finally listened to Sink and WHAT howwwww did i not get into this one earlier??? also Cynic is a newfound favorite & his new single The Great Divide is so good and i can't wait for the album!!
congratulations!
YESSSS i thought i was the only one!! "And" for me feels inevitable and i genuinely have to resist using it in every poem too!!!
omg inheritance games are peak🔥🔥
Thanks very much! It's funny - I often find writing long pieces a struggle, because my brain just wants to condense everything into as tiny a paragraph as possible.
I can relate to this a lot, how the characters are always so perfect, sometimes it makes you ask why you can’t be like that.
Also - This is a very well written piece! You’re very talented! :)
I clicked on this, expecting a longer poem, but it is short and I can still see the meaning in it and that amazes me. All my poetry tends to ramble, and I over explain and I never know where to end it. You don't and that is part of why I feel so drawn to your poetry. You are quite lovely. keep writing! <3
Thanks!
oh I love this! and same :P
okay i finally listened to Sink and WHAT howwwww did i not get into this one earlier??? also Cynic is a newfound favorite & his new single The Great Divide is so good and i can't wait for the album!!
I was so invested in this. You capture emotions so beautifully!