Wow this just brought back a lot of memories for me. I remember going to Montshire when I was three or four and being scared of the fog room (I have no idea why haha).
love this!! also totally get how you feel--i'm nearing the end of the first draft of my book and it'll be so hard to leave all the characters/their story...
You could add more obstacles (as GhostSlayer said), and you could also add subplots, or plots that contribute more toward character development than the main plot, but are still important to the story.
I am into Epic the musical! It is so good!
I will defenitly check that out! Thanks!
Nora Ephron's memoir I Feel Bad About My Neck is kind of the same way!! i'll definitely try out those two :D
Wow this just brought back a lot of memories for me. I remember going to Montshire when I was three or four and being scared of the fog room (I have no idea why haha).
love this!! also totally get how you feel--i'm nearing the end of the first draft of my book and it'll be so hard to leave all the characters/their story...
This is a response poem to a poem I wrote almost a year ago, which was in the 2024 Anthology.
That's great advice thank you!
This is so beautiful. I really love your tone and emotional connection, as well as the fact that you are incredibly in touch with your own emotions.
That is so sweet of you to say. I always hope people relate to the writing I do.
You could add more obstacles (as GhostSlayer said), and you could also add subplots, or plots that contribute more toward character development than the main plot, but are still important to the story.