The power and heart in this poem gave me goosebumps. Every line. Every deserves someone who cares as much as you do about the people around you. And you have such a way with words as your passion and urgency grows. Your voice rings true in this piece and I hope you can do a spoken word with this someday. Keep writing.
what an exquisite poem. I love the title and the line breaks and the pauses feels like breaths as she dances and the second stanza is my favorite, especially the pause after "shining in the gentle light of the moon" Amazing. Keep writing.
I think this is both a really great photo and poem! I think it's a very valuable exercise for writers to practice writing from images, much the same way a painter makes a still life.
I like to write about the dark side of society, like the things that nobody talks about, but are always there. And I also love to write about random things that come to mind, like if a song is stuck in my head, I'll write about what it makes me think of.
The power and heart in this poem gave me goosebumps. Every line. Every deserves someone who cares as much as you do about the people around you. And you have such a way with words as your passion and urgency grows. Your voice rings true in this piece and I hope you can do a spoken word with this someday. Keep writing.
what an exquisite poem. I love the title and the line breaks and the pauses feels like breaths as she dances and the second stanza is my favorite, especially the pause after "shining in the gentle light of the moon" Amazing. Keep writing.
That… makes a TON of sense actually!
I think this is both a really great photo and poem! I think it's a very valuable exercise for writers to practice writing from images, much the same way a painter makes a still life.
Thank you so much!
This is beautiful 😭! I love the ending, the metaphor with the flowers really sealed it up nicely!
aw I love this!! "busy becoming" is such a good line :D
thank you! I really never know how to end my poems so that’s lovely to hear
I love that for you! Dipper and Mable are so funny!
I like to write about the dark side of society, like the things that nobody talks about, but are always there. And I also love to write about random things that come to mind, like if a song is stuck in my head, I'll write about what it makes me think of.