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This is so beautiful it has such elegance!

White Roses 2 weeks ago

This is such a powerful sentence and so thoughtful.

A Sentence of Hope 2 weeks ago

Your poem is spectacular. I love the layout of the words and the tone of the read is so captivating and strong!

space between two lines 2 weeks ago

What a beautiful poem! I really loved how you used acting to connect to the bigger idea of self worth. I can relate!

Shadow 2 weeks ago

Omg I love Jennifer Lynn Barnes?

She also writes Little White Lies and The Grandest Game which is kind of part of the Inheritance games.

You should also read A Good Girls Guide to Murder by Holly Jackson if you liked the naturals

Book Club post by Aisha, August 22 2025 2 weeks ago

thank you so much!! :)

space between two lines 2 weeks ago

this is an excellent poem. i love the use of line breaks & the little bit of rhyme with the alliteration!

space between two lines 2 weeks ago

I love this so much and really relate to this! Often times I struggle to understand who I am; I'm always asking so many questions about myself and feel like I hold so many opposites and contradictions. You captured that thought process really well with a satisfying conclusion. 

The Space Between 2 weeks ago

This is so beautiful! I absolutely love this! The personification and the way that you describe everything is amazing! I really connect with this piece, and I'm so glad you decided to share it!

The Space Between 2 weeks ago

Thanks!

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