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This is a realistic poem, sad, but realistic. It is really heartbreaking to see so many kids, and adults who do not know how to read and write. I’m glad this site and others like it exist, so the people who do like writing can share their talent. 

Also - welcome to YWP! And, is your username Warrior cats? If so, I like the name (Ravepaw’s a great character). :3

When I Grow Up 2 weeks ago

This is really good - it shows the huge difference between what you hope and want, and what reality will throw with you.

When I Grow Up 2 weeks ago

vro you JUST saw this

nameless III 2 weeks ago

looking at things like summer camps that do a lot of writing stuff would probably get you some things.

Tiny Write by zoe_writer, February 5 2026 2 weeks ago

Thank you!!!

This country 2 weeks ago

I am speechless... this is beautiful.

This country 2 weeks ago

Ohh that's a good idea I didn't think of that

Tiny Write by Zemira, February 6 2026 2 weeks ago

I'd be really glad that there was no one else to bug me, and then I'd wake up in the middle of the night and be scared and want other people around me. I'd also probably die pretty fast - my survival skills suck lol

Tiny Write by Zemira, February 6 2026 2 weeks ago

Real :D

Tiny Write by GhostSlayer, February 5 2026 2 weeks ago

try to be all poetic and philosophical but end up dying within a week from some unforeseen problem, but i wouldn't want to be the last person on earth anyways: despite all my problems with humanity, i couldn't live without it

Tiny Write by Zemira, February 6 2026 2 weeks ago