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Ooh, I love this. Powerful and cleverly eloquent. I love pieces that talk directly to the person, and you executed this perfectly. This one left an impression on me. Amazing. Keep Writing

The Unsent Letter to a Certain Liar 2 weeks ago

Amazing. Can't wait for the next one!

The Beast and the Pocket Full of Hearts 2 weeks ago

Thank you!

To Georgia, On Leaving 2 weeks ago

Thank you so much!  I had a ton of fun writing it,  and definitely plan on writing more :)

The Beast and the Pocket Full of Hearts 2 weeks ago

Thank you so much!

for e.e. cummings 2 weeks ago

I love this chorus!

The Fall 2 weeks ago

I feel like this should be in a fairytale book, and I can't believe I had the pleasure of reading this on this website. The voice in this story is so unique, and the way you form your sentences is exquisite. I'd read a whole book filled with these stories, seriously. Keep writing

The Beast and the Pocket Full of Hearts 2 weeks ago

This made me smile and feel a little nostalgic for some reason. Lovely piece. Keep writing

To Georgia, On Leaving 2 weeks ago

What a lovely piece with imagery. "a little empty mahogany office with a wastebasket of broken pencils. it's bolted from the outside but the poets don't know" is such a good line, I can smell the mahogany and see the wastebasket. I also love the format this is written in! Clever. Keep writing.

for e.e. cummings 2 weeks ago

Thank you!

To Georgia, On Leaving 2 weeks ago