Hello there! I am glad my poem had some form of emotional impact on you, and i was wondering if maybe you could take the time to critique? I am trying to improve my poetry, so if you could let me know which lines were strong, what worked well, ND what interrupted the flow or just didn't add anything, that would be great!! <3
OMG this is absolutely epic the way you used color blew me away your art tastes like raspberries and vanilla ice cream
Hello there! I am glad my poem had some form of emotional impact on you, and i was wondering if maybe you could take the time to critique? I am trying to improve my poetry, so if you could let me know which lines were strong, what worked well, ND what interrupted the flow or just didn't add anything, that would be great!! <3
Welp I'm crying.
I try I try lol Could definitely be better though
I really liked this a lot.
Accidentally put my poem for the empathy prompt here instead of this one at first TwT
its literally amazing
This is so cool!! I really like how you gave the effect of each item being 3d while lying flat!
I did the reverse pickpocket thing to someone, and they used a hex to strike me down with lightning. 0/10 will not try again.
genuinely such a good poetry book I loved it sm!!