I echo EvaPrinceCharming's comment! I love it! One suggestion: It might be clearer and tighter if you removed the names Marcy and Tommy. That way there are just two people, you and I. Tommy might be expressed another way, such as "still not seeing anyone?" since we don't care who Tommy is, it is just establishing that the person had a later relationship. Really creative story!
Oh my goodness, this is gut wrenchingly beautiful. I love it. I love how short it is, and I think it's cool how you hardly describe the person the main character loves, or even the main character themself. I think it makes it more human.
honestly same, I need something in my ears 24/7
This is so good! I love it.
ooooh I love this!!
That’s so true! I found some of my favorite books because of reading that series.
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I echo EvaPrinceCharming's comment! I love it! One suggestion: It might be clearer and tighter if you removed the names Marcy and Tommy. That way there are just two people, you and I. Tommy might be expressed another way, such as "still not seeing anyone?" since we don't care who Tommy is, it is just establishing that the person had a later relationship. Really creative story!
I genuinely might cry omg
i'd be ok without social media, but I would die without spotify );
Oh my goodness, this is gut wrenchingly beautiful. I love it. I love how short it is, and I think it's cool how you hardly describe the person the main character loves, or even the main character themself. I think it makes it more human.
Thank you so much. I've been wanting to write a collection of nerdy love letters that turn scientific ideas into wonder for the universe for a while.