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That is a really good idea!

Tiny Write by riphssmyth, March 13 2025 1 week ago

"Being human is what makes you something worthy of love" - Citizen Soldier :)

second priority 1 week ago

For real! I can't wait to see what you do once you're through it!

Tiny Write by Writer1326, March 18 2025 1 week ago

Thank you

For Every Time 1 week ago

Thank you for your comment. I like the ending too! :)

second priority 2 weeks ago

This is an amazing poem!  Everything is phrased so perfectly, and it helps evoke the meaning.  The truth in it is incredible, as is the writing.

For Every Time 2 weeks ago

ooooo they should be an archer or horseback rider!!!

Tiny Write by riphssmyth, March 13 2025 2 weeks ago

Ikr it was so good!

Life Through Literature 2 weeks ago

This poem is magnificent! I love the concept and the way you described the feelings was perfection!

Life Through Literature 2 weeks ago

I'd suggest someone relatable (so, a teenager) who is (or becomes) really skilled at something (without being perfect ofc) but is also flawed and may not even realize it at the beginning. They could also have a disadvantageous background like poverty or mental/physical health issues (if health issues you could also have the character discover that gradually). This would make their wins more exciting as they beat the odds

Tiny Write by riphssmyth, March 13 2025 2 weeks ago