Ok thanks for the advice!!
I love the comparison, the transition, the setting. What if you went straight from “…shiny hair” to …”they don’t know that we understand”? It might be more showing that way? I’m not sure just a thought.
I like the way you talk about leaf wrinkles and ripples. It’s so pretty.
Thank you!
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Thank you! I was inspired to do a whimsical style by a grove of aspen trees that grow near me
yep that's how it feels for me too :P
This is beautiful! I love it!
Thanks :D
I love the whimsy in this!!!!
Ok thanks for the advice!!
I love the comparison, the transition, the setting. What if you went straight from “…shiny hair” to …”they don’t know that we understand”? It might be more showing that way? I’m not sure just a thought.
I like the way you talk about leaf wrinkles and ripples. It’s so pretty.
Thank you!
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Thank you! I was inspired to do a whimsical style by a grove of aspen trees that grow near me
yep that's how it feels for me too :P
This is beautiful! I love it!
Thanks :D
I love the whimsy in this!!!!