This is brilliant! The dialogue feels so authentic - which can be really hard to do (but so vital) in extraordinary circumstances. But I suppose that's kinda the point isn't it? The normalcy? both the utter wonder and normalcy of love?
I love that you used the reference to the year of the snake and the horse. It was not only really fitting, it strengthened your entire poem overall, very nice!
Captivating. I love the feeling you so well described here - it's what I strive for with every performance. You really captured the feeling of being onstage and having your moment. Great job! :)
This is brilliant! The dialogue feels so authentic - which can be really hard to do (but so vital) in extraordinary circumstances. But I suppose that's kinda the point isn't it? The normalcy? both the utter wonder and normalcy of love?
This is so beautiful!!
Thank you so much! Also, I love your pfp
Thank you so much!!
Thank you!
I love that you used the reference to the year of the snake and the horse. It was not only really fitting, it strengthened your entire poem overall, very nice!
That is so real, I can't live for two seconds without hearing someone singing Golden, but nobody on my team at school is good at singing 💀
thank you so much!!!
You’ve GOTTA MAKE MORE PLEASEEEEE
Captivating. I love the feeling you so well described here - it's what I strive for with every performance. You really captured the feeling of being onstage and having your moment. Great job! :)