Seriously though, this is so relatable. I think the phrase "Life's unfair," is a lazy adult's way of putting off something negative. They think that since they "weren't born yesterday" they know everything. And the feeling that you need to decide what you want to do with your life, it's so common. The way it just suddenly occurs to you that you are almost an adult, that must be hard. But thank you for writing this. I've noticed your writing is incredibly relatable.
this whole thing is amazing especially this paragraph, We are iron dressed in cotton, we are strength made of empathy, power made of care, we are the ones who stand back up after being pushed down again and again. We are the mothers of revolution and the daughters of silence.
Nice work on this. I think it totally captures a deep emotion that women feel really often. It's important to get this problem addressed. Because its really not okay. But anyway, this is really good.
aw! thanks so much!!
Seriously though, this is so relatable. I think the phrase "Life's unfair," is a lazy adult's way of putting off something negative. They think that since they "weren't born yesterday" they know everything. And the feeling that you need to decide what you want to do with your life, it's so common. The way it just suddenly occurs to you that you are almost an adult, that must be hard. But thank you for writing this. I've noticed your writing is incredibly relatable.
This is so, so amazing!! All throughout, I was excited as to what I would get to read next in the poem
Thank you! I wasnt really sure if that paragraph really hit or was just corny so this assured me a bit lol
Thank you! It is, so we can avoid women in the present and future from getting hurt.
Thanks :)
This is such a cool take in the challenge!! A beautiful poem as well
this whole thing is amazing especially this paragraph,
We are iron dressed in cotton, we are strength made of empathy, power made of care, we are the ones who stand back up after being pushed down again and again. We are the mothers of revolution and the daughters of silence.
Nice work on this. I think it totally captures a deep emotion that women feel really often. It's important to get this problem addressed. Because its really not okay. But anyway, this is really good.
Thanks!!