Beautiful. Every detail is so carefully chosen and with such restraint. And the East Wind is gloriously unresolved. I can see the threads of his soul --- or perhaps his prayer shawl? --- blowing on the wind of himself!
This is brilliant! The dialogue feels so authentic - which can be really hard to do (but so vital) in extraordinary circumstances. But I suppose that's kinda the point isn't it? The normalcy? both the utter wonder and normalcy of love?
I love that you used the reference to the year of the snake and the horse. It was not only really fitting, it strengthened your entire poem overall, very nice!
thanks!
This is so cool! Walks the delicate line between spooky and cozy. The slight blur makes it look painted.
Beautiful. Every detail is so carefully chosen and with such restraint. And the East Wind is gloriously unresolved. I can see the threads of his soul --- or perhaps his prayer shawl? --- blowing on the wind of himself!
Awesome. This made me smile.
This is brilliant! The dialogue feels so authentic - which can be really hard to do (but so vital) in extraordinary circumstances. But I suppose that's kinda the point isn't it? The normalcy? both the utter wonder and normalcy of love?
This is so beautiful!!
Thank you so much! Also, I love your pfp
Thank you so much!!
Thank you!
I love that you used the reference to the year of the snake and the horse. It was not only really fitting, it strengthened your entire poem overall, very nice!