I love this! I love how you were able to give your own thoughts a poetic rhythm and feel. I particularly like your line "my heart is racing but my mind is blank with things I don't know how to express". It's powerful!
This is a realistic poem, sad, but realistic. It is really heartbreaking to see so many kids, and adults who do not know how to read and write. I’m glad this site and others like it exist, so the people who do like writing can share their talent.
Also - welcome to YWP! And, is your username Warrior cats? If so, I like the name (Ravepaw’s a great character). :3
Beautiful! I love "almost alone"
I love this! I love how you were able to give your own thoughts a poetic rhythm and feel. I particularly like your line "my heart is racing but my mind is blank with things I don't know how to express". It's powerful!
Thank you! Also, yes it is warrior cats, Ravenpaw is my favorite character!
The raindrops are so pretty!
This is a realistic poem, sad, but realistic. It is really heartbreaking to see so many kids, and adults who do not know how to read and write. I’m glad this site and others like it exist, so the people who do like writing can share their talent.
Also - welcome to YWP! And, is your username Warrior cats? If so, I like the name (Ravepaw’s a great character). :3
This is really good - it shows the huge difference between what you hope and want, and what reality will throw with you.
vro you JUST saw this
looking at things like summer camps that do a lot of writing stuff would probably get you some things.
Thank you!!!
I am speechless... this is beautiful.