I absolutely love the way this is written. Nothing stands out to me as inherently wrong. You could add a little more detail, and I feel like we learn a lot about Izima, but not much about Em.
"Sun Through the Rain" is this week's featured visual art on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Everybody can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
"Watching" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Everybody can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
What an absolute UNIT of a cookie! I'm digging this interpretation of cookies and milk, I've never seen a drop cookie like this before! The heart adds the perfect little touch.
Oh my gosh, I didn't even realize this was in response to the Five challenge at first. This vocabulary fits in flawlessly, not forced at all! This is exactly how I remember my days at summer camp, too: filled with purpose, though I didn't realize it at the time.
I love the whimsy of this piece ("or who had crashed into a log that day")! But also, I get the impression you know what you're talking about, when it comes to boats. That knowledgeability (or your gift of convincing the reader you're knowledgeable, in any case) really shines through.
If I’m having writer’s block, I usually start by writing something that I know. Something meaningful to me, or something that’s happening around me.
Thank you!
This is so true!
Thank you! I feel like we learn so much when we're not trying to at all.
I absolutely love the way this is written. Nothing stands out to me as inherently wrong. You could add a little more detail, and I feel like we learn a lot about Izima, but not much about Em.
"Sun Through the Rain" is this week's featured visual art on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Everybody can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
"Watching" is this week's featured poem on vtdigger.org, up now in their Life & Culture section. Everybody can check it out now, here! vtdigger.org/life-culture
What an absolute UNIT of a cookie! I'm digging this interpretation of cookies and milk, I've never seen a drop cookie like this before! The heart adds the perfect little touch.
Oh my gosh, I didn't even realize this was in response to the Five challenge at first. This vocabulary fits in flawlessly, not forced at all! This is exactly how I remember my days at summer camp, too: filled with purpose, though I didn't realize it at the time.
I love the whimsy of this piece ("or who had crashed into a log that day")! But also, I get the impression you know what you're talking about, when it comes to boats. That knowledgeability (or your gift of convincing the reader you're knowledgeable, in any case) really shines through.