I love this! It has so much meaning in each word and blank space! It celebrates the life of every beautiful person created who never were recognized, but still impact the stories of thousands of others!
Ps. If you wouldn’t mind I would really love some advice on any one of my poems
I try to break them where it feels natural unless I'm deliberately being unnatural so it definitely feels weird when you hate a line break but can't tell if the author was being purposeful :P
I like it!! I think some of the earlier details are unnecessary - I like some details but too much draws the reader out of the story. also, I think the title could be altered to just be "marigolds" but that's only a suggestion. but otherwise it's good!
Thank you so much. I'll go check out your poems for sure!
I love this! It really captured my fear of growing up that I felt when I was little, I always wanted to stay a kid and cling to my childhood memories!
I love this! It has so much meaning in each word and blank space! It celebrates the life of every beautiful person created who never were recognized, but still impact the stories of thousands of others!
Ps. If you wouldn’t mind I would really love some advice on any one of my poems
This hit me hard
Its beautiful
I liked getting new shoes, I just hated getting rid of the old ones lol thank you!!
I love this so much! I hated getting new shoes as a little kid
thank you so very much!!
This is an absolutely wonderful poem, I love it so very much
I try to break them where it feels natural unless I'm deliberately being unnatural so it definitely feels weird when you hate a line break but can't tell if the author was being purposeful :P
I like it!! I think some of the earlier details are unnecessary - I like some details but too much draws the reader out of the story. also, I think the title could be altered to just be "marigolds" but that's only a suggestion. but otherwise it's good!