This really captures a specific feeling I can't quite place, it's really well executed. Really nice poem!
Thanks!!
This is so beautiful, it's haunting and yet holds a quiet comfort. "We live so much... almost' is such a beautiful line!
This is haunting and beautiful. 'The Night's Eye' is a perfect title for this piece.
Visceral and raw, something as simple as pancakes can be a reminder of our tasks and trying to find joy in the little things again.
I don't personally have experience with this, but I would get either some friends or, even better, a teacher, to read through and give comments!
I haven't! I'll check it out :)
I've only really tried editing one long piece, but I honestly just like to read through and make sure things make sense and flow nicely. It sounds simple, and I'm sure there's better words, but I think it's (at least) a good way to start!
This poem is so beautiful!
This really captures a specific feeling I can't quite place, it's really well executed. Really nice poem!
Thanks!!
This is so beautiful, it's haunting and yet holds a quiet comfort. "We live so much... almost' is such a beautiful line!
This is haunting and beautiful. 'The Night's Eye' is a perfect title for this piece.
Thanks!!
Visceral and raw, something as simple as pancakes can be a reminder of our tasks and trying to find joy in the little things again.
I don't personally have experience with this, but I would get either some friends or, even better, a teacher, to read through and give comments!
I haven't! I'll check it out :)
I've only really tried editing one long piece, but I honestly just like to read through and make sure things make sense and flow nicely. It sounds simple, and I'm sure there's better words, but I think it's (at least) a good way to start!
This poem is so beautiful!