Your story captured me every step of the way, and it was perfect: just as I got comfortable with something, it was changed, which may not sound good but it actually was. The ending too is so sad but true and needed to happen.
I like them too!! I do a thing with my friends a lot when we're bored in class - they give me 3 random words and I write them a short poem. it works super well for writer's block and I love walking through the hallways and seeing my poems taped up in people's lockers :D here's one if you want it: Menu. Mist. Defendant. Fortune. Breath.
yeah I agree with bumblebea & twoblueviolets, try having your MC kind of montage through some moments where he was being either obviously horrible (audience anger at a good read moment!) or more subtly bad (realization). hope your writing goes well!
I really love this! The words are so careful and true, and I was enraptured so quickly!
That's so fun! Thanks!
Your story captured me every step of the way, and it was perfect: just as I got comfortable with something, it was changed, which may not sound good but it actually was. The ending too is so sad but true and needed to happen.
I like them too!! I do a thing with my friends a lot when we're bored in class - they give me 3 random words and I write them a short poem. it works super well for writer's block and I love walking through the hallways and seeing my poems taped up in people's lockers :D here's one if you want it: Menu. Mist. Defendant. Fortune. Breath.
yeah I agree with bumblebea & twoblueviolets, try having your MC kind of montage through some moments where he was being either obviously horrible (audience anger at a good read moment!) or more subtly bad (realization). hope your writing goes well!
omg congrats!!!!
Francesca, I love this! From the vision of this piece down to the description, it's so beautiful in a meaningful way!
Thanks for your ideas! They are very helpful! :)
I personally love Brooklyn 99 because all the characters are amazing and also Gilmore girls because the humor is spot on
This is so relatable - I definitely feel your pain :( persevere, and something may come of this relationship! Good luck!