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Thank you so much for the ideas!

Someone told me to keep writing, so I did.  Here's a little bit more :) 

It's actually part of a novel I'm currently drafting! I'm having a ton of fun with it!

Thank you so much! :)

"Her colors were yellows and evergreens/Painted across a sea of healing light. " Such a beautiful and emotionally honest poem. Great job!

Thank you so much!

Thanks, I took inspiration for it from a really talented poet who I look up to :)

I like the impact of the last line. :)

I love this! I like the fourth stanza in particular. :)

:)