I love that you used the reference to the year of the snake and the horse. It was not only really fitting, it strengthened your entire poem overall, very nice!
Captivating. I love the feeling you so well described here - it's what I strive for with every performance. You really captured the feeling of being onstage and having your moment. Great job! :)
I love that you used the reference to the year of the snake and the horse. It was not only really fitting, it strengthened your entire poem overall, very nice!
That is so real, I can't live for two seconds without hearing someone singing Golden, but nobody on my team at school is good at singing 💀
thank you so much!!!
You’ve GOTTA MAKE MORE PLEASEEEEE
Captivating. I love the feeling you so well described here - it's what I strive for with every performance. You really captured the feeling of being onstage and having your moment. Great job! :)
Nice! How is it so far?
"flickering like a miracle lit again and again and again"! What a wonderful last line. I lover the idea of a flickering miracle.
Wow! I literally just started The Sun and the Star. this is great news haha.
Stoppp I love this!the banter between Millie and Graham feels so real and I'm so invested in their story and them.
This is such a tenderly bittersweet poem and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!