This is super powerful. I love the line "I'm thankful that my family has rules in place that bar my mind from even more outlets because the news channels are enough"
I wish i could like this comment, but i agree, I also think teens should have their own social media where the age is limited and once u turn 18 it gets deleted🙂
I echo EvaPrinceCharming's comment! I love it! One suggestion: It might be clearer and tighter if you removed the names Marcy and Tommy. That way there are just two people, you and I. Tommy might be expressed another way, such as "still not seeing anyone?" since we don't care who Tommy is, it is just establishing that the person had a later relationship. Really creative story!
This is super powerful. I love the line "I'm thankful that my family has rules in place that bar my mind from even more outlets because the news channels are enough"
thank you!
I wish i could like this comment, but i agree, I also think teens should have their own social media where the age is limited and once u turn 18 it gets deleted🙂
honestly same, I need something in my ears 24/7
This is so good! I love it.
ooooh I love this!!
That’s so true! I found some of my favorite books because of reading that series.
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I echo EvaPrinceCharming's comment! I love it! One suggestion: It might be clearer and tighter if you removed the names Marcy and Tommy. That way there are just two people, you and I. Tommy might be expressed another way, such as "still not seeing anyone?" since we don't care who Tommy is, it is just establishing that the person had a later relationship. Really creative story!
I genuinely might cry omg