Thank you so much, that means a lot to hear. I was really trying to capture that quiet tension between people who are physically close but emotionally far apart.
This is really captivating! The similes and metaphors you use feel very original, and the line lengths make me feel the tension your poem describes. I have a really clear image in my head of two people, lying in bed, facing away from each other surrounded by silence.
As a kid, I'd work this joke into every story I wrote, no matter if it made sense or not:
Knock knock! -Who's there? Cows go. -Cows go who? No they don't, silly, they go moo!
super dumb but I loved it lol
Beautiful!!
thank you so so so much that's the best compliment ive literally ever gotten <3333
Thank you so much! I never knew Marie Lu wrote a book called "Life Before Legend! I've always been hungering for more books in the Legend series.
Admittedly, I googled the answer, so I won't give it away, but here's a hint for anyone wondering: the answer is a play on words
Thank you so much, that means a lot to hear. I was really trying to capture that quiet tension between people who are physically close but emotionally far apart.
dude. duuuudeeee. this is outstanding
Ooh I like that one it makes no sense :D
How do you get out of a concrete room with no doors, no windows, a table and a mirror?
This is really captivating! The similes and metaphors you use feel very original, and the line lengths make me feel the tension your poem describes. I have a really clear image in my head of two people, lying in bed, facing away from each other surrounded by silence.