I love this take on the challenge! In so few words, you HAVE explained what a smartphone is. I wonder how someone from another era would respond to this, what questions they would ask.
I think that's alright!! Poetry is wild and unpredictable, and if your publisher can't realize that, they're not right for publishing poetry. Lots of poetry books either don't have a theme, or have a very loose one that doesn't connect to all of the poems. Good luck!
This absolutely transports you to another time and place... "Beyond the World" is an apt title.
I love this take on the challenge! In so few words, you HAVE explained what a smartphone is. I wonder how someone from another era would respond to this, what questions they would ask.
A brave moment! Props to you for sticking up for your brother, who was in need of a little help. Your last words are powerful.
thank you!!! <3 <3
Have you read the Extraordinaries?
Oh my gosh yes this is such a good book!
Ah thank you so much! I’m trying to self publish my poetry book and hearing this helps a lot, as I was worried about if it needed a theme!
I love this idea! I am looking forward to reading it!!
I think that's alright!! Poetry is wild and unpredictable, and if your publisher can't realize that, they're not right for publishing poetry. Lots of poetry books either don't have a theme, or have a very loose one that doesn't connect to all of the poems. Good luck!
Ahh this is such a mysterious fable! I love it! Also, the voice!