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What do you do when the walls come down,
And you finally drop your heavy crown?

What do you do when the door is wide,
And you let the kindness step inside?

What do you do when the fear is gone,
And you aren't the only one holding on?

What do you do

when the light breaks through,

and you finally let me walk with you?

Ps. I love your writing :)

What Do You Do? 4 days ago

What do you do when the shadows part,
And I see the crying within your heart?

What do you do when I’m standing near,
To catch the fall of every tear?

What do you do when the air is still,
And I offer the breath you cannot fill?

What do you do

when the silence is shared,

and you finally see that someone cared?

What Do You Do? 4 days ago

The goat has done it again! I lover the way you created a visual effect with your poem's layout

Field Notes on an Elephant's Grief 4 days ago

Your hands must have stung so bad after making this lol

I <3 WINTER 4 days ago

Not a single thought behind those eyes

Ribbet Ribbet 4 days ago

This is soooo good! I love how you use figurative language!

Halley's Comet 4 days ago

Just finished The Dare and holy was it a whirlwind. I didn't know what was happening half the time but it is definitely a good read

Books Books Books! 4 days ago

This is amazing! I love it so much, keep it up!

Pen to Paper 4 days ago

thank you!!!

white apricot blossoms 4 days ago

My school keeps the phone policy pretty strict too. If you're caught with your phone out you have to do a Saturday school. And if a teacher doesn't take a student's phone... I'm not sure what happens then😅

Tiny Write by Lulu_D, November 28 2025 4 days ago