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This is a realistic poem, sad, but realistic. It is really heartbreaking to see so many kids, and adults who do not know how to read and write. I’m glad this site and others like it exist, so the people who do like writing can share their talent. 

Also - welcome to YWP! And, is your username Warrior cats? If so, I like the name (Ravepaw’s a great character). :3

When I Grow Up 1 week ago

This is really good - it shows the huge difference between what you hope and want, and what reality will throw with you.

When I Grow Up 1 week ago

vro you JUST saw this

nameless III 1 week ago

looking at things like summer camps that do a lot of writing stuff would probably get you some things.

Tiny Write by zoe_writer, February 5 2026 1 week ago

Thank you!!!

This country 1 week ago

I am speechless... this is beautiful.

This country 1 week ago

Ohh that's a good idea I didn't think of that

Tiny Write by Zemira, February 6 2026 1 week ago

I'd be really glad that there was no one else to bug me, and then I'd wake up in the middle of the night and be scared and want other people around me. I'd also probably die pretty fast - my survival skills suck lol

Tiny Write by Zemira, February 6 2026 1 week ago

Real :D

Tiny Write by GhostSlayer, February 5 2026 1 week ago

try to be all poetic and philosophical but end up dying within a week from some unforeseen problem, but i wouldn't want to be the last person on earth anyways: despite all my problems with humanity, i couldn't live without it

Tiny Write by Zemira, February 6 2026 1 week ago