I echo EvaPrinceCharming's comment! I love it! One suggestion: It might be clearer and tighter if you removed the names Marcy and Tommy. That way there are just two people, you and I. Tommy might be expressed another way, such as "still not seeing anyone?" since we don't care who Tommy is, it is just establishing that the person had a later relationship. Really creative story!
Oh my goodness, this is gut wrenchingly beautiful. I love it. I love how short it is, and I think it's cool how you hardly describe the person the main character loves, or even the main character themself. I think it makes it more human.
cont- which is a bigger cause of loneliness than social media itself, and the ban is also not working too well, in an interview, a lot of kids said that they didn't even get banned. Also, some social media is helpful to learn, and connect with other people, so I think that the companies should be doing more work to filter things kids can see, and society should just generally accept teens more.
I feel like it's not all harmful, and companies should be doing more work to filter the content for people under 16, instead of the government coming and banning it altogether. I think that it's more important for social media companies to stop online predators, instead of banning use for the people who were not the problem. I think that there should also be more opportunities for teens to just exist in the outside world and be themselves. In a lot of places there's nowhere for teens to go,
I echo EvaPrinceCharming's comment! I love it! One suggestion: It might be clearer and tighter if you removed the names Marcy and Tommy. That way there are just two people, you and I. Tommy might be expressed another way, such as "still not seeing anyone?" since we don't care who Tommy is, it is just establishing that the person had a later relationship. Really creative story!
I genuinely might cry omg
i'd be ok without social media, but I would die without spotify );
Oh my goodness, this is gut wrenchingly beautiful. I love it. I love how short it is, and I think it's cool how you hardly describe the person the main character loves, or even the main character themself. I think it makes it more human.
Thank you so much. I've been wanting to write a collection of nerdy love letters that turn scientific ideas into wonder for the universe for a while.
cont- which is a bigger cause of loneliness than social media itself, and the ban is also not working too well, in an interview, a lot of kids said that they didn't even get banned. Also, some social media is helpful to learn, and connect with other people, so I think that the companies should be doing more work to filter things kids can see, and society should just generally accept teens more.
I feel like it's not all harmful, and companies should be doing more work to filter the content for people under 16, instead of the government coming and banning it altogether. I think that it's more important for social media companies to stop online predators, instead of banning use for the people who were not the problem. I think that there should also be more opportunities for teens to just exist in the outside world and be themselves. In a lot of places there's nowhere for teens to go,
why do girls have an "I hate pink" phase, if boys don't have an "I hate blue" phase?? that's the real question
This is really sweet :D I wonder who it's about...
Anatomy is amazing!! I just finished reading it and now I'm working on Immortality, the sequel. :D