What a lovely short story. Your writing flows so well and I was invested from beginning to end. Love the message. “Enough so I can breath again” is my favorite line, I can feel that from the main character. Glad I was lucky enough to read this. Keep writing!
Even if we do not consciously remember an event, it may still have a psychological effect that changes our behavior, thereby changing others' psyches, and so on. Every event, while seemingly insignificant, changes the world; its absence would change life as we know it. Therefore, it must have happened, and it must have been important that it did.
yeah I agree! or you could do what I do with writer's block/feeling stuck, which is to ask someone (anyone, could be a friend or a parent or a random word generator) for 3-5 random words and then write a poem or short story using those. you can also write down how you feel in messy terms while it's happening and then write a poem later when your head feels clearer!
What a lovely short story. Your writing flows so well and I was invested from beginning to end. Love the message. “Enough so I can breath again” is my favorite line, I can feel that from the main character. Glad I was lucky enough to read this. Keep writing!
Incredibly moving and thoughtful piece and I could see the image of everyone dancing and this small but powerful flame. Keep writing.
Lovely photograph! This made me smile.
Even if we do not consciously remember an event, it may still have a psychological effect that changes our behavior, thereby changing others' psyches, and so on. Every event, while seemingly insignificant, changes the world; its absence would change life as we know it. Therefore, it must have happened, and it must have been important that it did.
Wow!! This is amazing
this is how I feel right now - an ICE raid just happened up the street from my school. not here, not anywhere, not ever.
yeah I agree! or you could do what I do with writer's block/feeling stuck, which is to ask someone (anyone, could be a friend or a parent or a random word generator) for 3-5 random words and then write a poem or short story using those. you can also write down how you feel in messy terms while it's happening and then write a poem later when your head feels clearer!
i love olivia deans acoustic the hardest part! its so good!!
olivia dean is great! the spotify dj plays her so much lol
of course