Hi! A magic system revolving animals sounds so cool. If you're going for like a based around gods system, I suggest animal gods or if you're drawing on just magic, maybe the animals could help harness abilities or give magic users their abilities? Almost like a witch's familiar lol. I hope this helped and you don't have to take any of my ideas if they're bad lol, good luck writing!
It might just be my Swiftie brain working overtime, but do I see some Taylor references? (Specifically exile, Champagne Problems, and possibly Maroon?)
Yes, basically each line. :)
Very funny and surprisingly profound!
Hi! A magic system revolving animals sounds so cool. If you're going for like a based around gods system, I suggest animal gods or if you're drawing on just magic, maybe the animals could help harness abilities or give magic users their abilities? Almost like a witch's familiar lol. I hope this helped and you don't have to take any of my ideas if they're bad lol, good luck writing!
It might just be my Swiftie brain working overtime, but do I see some Taylor references? (Specifically exile, Champagne Problems, and possibly Maroon?)
This is beautiful, wph! Welcome to YWP!
thank YOU for your kind words! hope everything has turned out okay <3
Thank you so much!
i can't wait eithherr :) true 2024 ends rlly soon if you think about it.
This poem really portrays the feeling of not belonging, and not feeling worthy of something. So beautifully devastating
thank you! I like this one a lot :)