For the adjective challenge I described an apple and than I asked ChatGPT to describe an apple without adjectives.
Personally I think it's crazy what chatgpt can do in seconds, it took me time to write this poem and chatgpt takes other people's work and combines it to get a poem. Don't get me wrong, chatgpt is definitely useful but it is crazy what it can do
This is my poem
An apple is
A reminder
A token to bring you back
To the day in the orchard
When you were six years old
Sitting on your dad's shoulders
Reaching for an apple
That you had decided was perfect
And you were never going to eat it
Just look at it
But your hunger got the best of you
While your parents talked
To friends of theirs
The apple
Tastes like apple cider
The apple cider you had
On that day in the orchard
It warmed your hands
As the wind blew around you
Causing the leaves to dance
And brightening the tip of your nose
An apple
Fits in your palm
You don't need two hands to hold it
You used to though
You used to have to cup it
In both palms
In order for it to stay put
Sometimes you would forget
And it would drop to the muddy ground
It would roll away
And your mom would say
How you can't eat it now
Because it's dirty
Sometimes you'd cry over your lost apple
Other times you would just have your mom
Hoist you up to grab another
An apple
Is the memories of fall
Wrapped into a sphere
This is ChatGPTs
I did NOT write this
A sphere in hand, it fits just right,
A stem above, a core in sight.
It hangs on limbs through wind and sun,
A gift of earth when day is done.
A bite releases crunch and sound,
Juice flows free, no bounds are found.
Seeds within, a tale they tell,
Of branch, of root, of hidden well.
No shade or hue shall mark this song,
But still it rolls with taste so strong.
A simple fruit, a timeless thread,
From hand to mouth, from tree to spread.
Comments
I feel like while ChatGPT’s poem is more perfect in its meter and rhyme, yours is so much better in my opinion. The memories and unique human feeling you wove into it were wonderful! Cool experiment, too
yeah I agree - ai poems are always way too ordered for my lowercase free verse tastes lol, but they also feel vaguely wrong, like something you can't put your finger on. being a poet is a uniquely human thing
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