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  • Reply to: I Thought I Knew   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 2:45pm
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    I love the repetition in this! I think it enhances that questioning and wondering tone.

  • Reply to: Writing   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 1:54pm
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    I love this so much!

  • Reply to: ink deity   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 1:52pm
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    Thank you!

  • Reply to: Stop   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 1:48pm
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    I love the rhythm you've created here. Each stanza has it's own specific punch and it makes me truly feel like it won't stop.

  • Reply to: Speak   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 1:29pm
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    This is so incredible

  • Reply to: Petrol   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 1:27pm
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    Thank you!

  • Reply to: Petrol   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 1:13pm
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    Your voice is so amazing in this! I love the self-reflection and working through thoughts in this.

  • Reply to: TRANSITION   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 1:07pm
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    I love the first line, "Uh oh it's autumn." I've never read a reaction like that to a season, it captivated me right away!

  • Reply to: Ten things that made me want to cry today   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 12:58pm
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    Thank you so much!

  • Reply to: I Love Snowboarding   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 12:56pm
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    I can truly feel your passion coming through with this piece!

  • Reply to: Spotlight   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 12:48pm
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    Your voice is so strong in this poem! I love the way it carries the narration through the whole piece. It's a great moment captured beautifully!

  • Reply to: Unseen   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 12:40pm
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    I love the sense of "lurking" that is felt throughout the poem and the questioning of searching and not really finding anything.

  • Reply to: ghost.   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 12:18pm
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    I really love this! The beginning line captivated me right away!

  • Reply to: Write   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 11:50am
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    I love this, it made me smile the whole time. It's so true though, write to write.

  • Reply to: The darkness   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 11:43am
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    I love the sense of building tension in this piece. I feel the panic and the questioning and then the relief at the end.

  • Reply to: ink deity   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 11:12am
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    This is so beautiful and personal!

  • Reply to: If a tree falls in the forest...   Thursday, February 14, 2019 - 6:04am
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    Thank you for reading it!

  • Reply to: beneath the surface - part 1   Wednesday, February 13, 2019 - 9:03pm
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    Part 2 in the works...to come very shortly!

  • Reply to: Snow day   Wednesday, February 13, 2019 - 4:23pm
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    School canceled really?

  • Reply to: The Great Pigpression   Wednesday, February 13, 2019 - 7:16am
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    Thanks I wrote it one day when I was bored and it turned out pretty good. So then I typed it on here.

  • Reply to: Lost   Tuesday, February 12, 2019 - 9:29pm
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    Thank you so much! That is something I have been working on lately, I'm glad it came through.

  • Reply to: Security   Tuesday, February 12, 2019 - 9:23pm
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    I absolutely love the details in this poem and the voice and relationship/story that is developed throughout it!!

  • Reply to: under the sun   Tuesday, February 12, 2019 - 7:35pm
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    Thanks!

  • Reply to: The Sky of Possibilities   Tuesday, February 12, 2019 - 4:31pm
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    Thank you!

  • Reply to: What Lies Ahead   Tuesday, February 12, 2019 - 1:14pm
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    Thanks!