Of course! You are very talented! I hope to see more writings like this in the future! :)
Oh wow this is amazing!! Didn't realize my line was in it until now, thanks so much and great job everyone who contributed!
Wow, I love how this poem captures the way the doll is forever stuck in a state of waiting & longing...i can totally see everything in your description, great job!!
Thank you, im so glad you liked it! :)
I LOVE this! I did the challenge too! I love how you described how the doll is felling and where the doll came from!
(P.s I am adding this to my Loves!)
I LOVE this! You're so talented! This amazingness deserves to be on the Daily Read and more!!!
(I am adding it to my Loves!)
This is a story of a forgotten doll that loved the girl that used to play with her. She can't let go of the past and soon she finds herself in a time loop. Waiting each day for the same thing...Then forgetting.
“Do you know what it is?” Symbolizes what do YOU think started your path or journey through your life. Hope you enjoy! <3
THIS IS AMAZING
I don't know what more to say
Thank you so much! :3
Thank you! Yes I did.
This is wonderful. I love how you’ve personified Time, made it a fragile thing that morphs to sharp metal when you lest expect it.
this is truly a.m.a.z.i.n.g
Thanks so much!!
Thank you so very much!! :)) It means a lot to me :)
I love that you made it in the perspective of a figurine. You really got to how people change interests as they grow in a way that you wouldn’t have if it had been a person.
Sawyer, this poem has so many layers. It's bold and defiant, but also tender and giving. I don't know how you pulled it all off in one short piece, but you did, and wow!
Agreed! And you are such an amazing writer, too! It has been amazing to see this "journey" that you've been in your the past "twelve craziest months" of your life through your beautiful poetry. Keep writing!!!! <3:)
Oh, Hi!! Thank you so much!
Thank you for responding and adding to it! Your line definitely helped make it amazing <3
Yes you are! You are powerful!
Omg thank you posting this and also adding my line into it! it all turned out really amazing!
This poem is so pretty, I love all the metaphors similes/figurative language and the structure and the description and all :)<3
it's elise from agt btw
I love the imagery in this! You captured winter so beautifully!
Great photo! I love how behind the deer you can see the sunset and the moon!