Hi, does anyone have any tips on how to go more in-depth in a certain moment in a book?
GhostSlayer
VT
14 years old
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Personally, I like to slow down what's happening. Don't be afraid to use incomplete sentences or italics or bold to really emphasize what's happening, play-by-play. Really zone in on the senses (a) character(s) feeling, what they're thinking, etc. Put yourself in their situation and dump out, even if it's messy, the most raw reaction you can.
Comments
Personally, I like to slow down what's happening. Don't be afraid to use incomplete sentences or italics or bold to really emphasize what's happening, play-by-play. Really zone in on the senses (a) character(s) feeling, what they're thinking, etc. Put yourself in their situation and dump out, even if it's messy, the most raw reaction you can.
Thank you for the advice!
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