I am stuck on a bit of a story I am writing. The main character just came out of a coma. I don't know how to show her fear and confusion. Any ideas? Thanks. :)
June
VT
13 years old
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Oh, that sounds so cool! You could try having her see a friend or someone in her family, playing out her emotions and what happened in a conversation. Just an idea, feel free to take it or leave it (:
Thanks :)
You could have her freak out over how different some things are from before she went into a coma. Like something's been repainted, or ai has made advancements or something depending on how long they've been in that coma.
Thanks for the idea
That is so fun!
From the times I woke up from being under anesthesia, I would recommend that the person waking up doesn't always know or care too much about exactly what's going on. People kept asking me how I was feeling, and I was insistent on saying, "I just want a popsicle."
It was the same with other people I know. They just kept saying, "I want a hamburger."
Maybe not the serious tone you want, but it would add a layer of humor and relatability.
does make sense for the person to be hungry. Filling up the belly is a priority
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Oh, that sounds so cool! You could try having her see a friend or someone in her family, playing out her emotions and what happened in a conversation. Just an idea, feel free to take it or leave it (:
Thanks :)
You could have her freak out over how different some things are from before she went into a coma. Like something's been repainted, or ai has made advancements or something depending on how long they've been in that coma.
Thanks for the idea
That is so fun!
From the times I woke up from being under anesthesia, I would recommend that the person waking up doesn't always know or care too much about exactly what's going on. People kept asking me how I was feeling, and I was insistent on saying, "I just want a popsicle."
It was the same with other people I know. They just kept saying, "I want a hamburger."
Maybe not the serious tone you want, but it would add a layer of humor and relatability.
does make sense for the person to be hungry. Filling up the belly is a priority
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