Wandering through the sprawling palace gardens, I absentmindedly twirled a daisy between my fingers. It was a Sunday, which meant I was free from royal duties until the evening. Of course, if anyone were to find me out here, in all my bare footed, grass-stained, tangled-haired glory, my peaceful afternoon would be snatched away in an instant.
A rustling sound approached from behind a giant rose bush, and I sprang into a sprint. I darted through hedges and over clumps of flowers, resembling a gazelle much more than a princess (or so I assumed).
When I finally slowed, panting for breath with my skirt ripped beyond repair, I was in a part of the gardens I had yet to explore. Glancing about, I took in the towering oak trees and clusters of sleepy daffodils. A narrow trail stretched before me, splitting off in two directions. The one on my right curved around the corner into a copse of eucalyptus trees, while the other meandered across a sunny green field scattered with daisies.
As I stood pondering my options, I heard the sound of distant voices heading my way. For all I knew, they were a search party out looking for me. My mind made up, I dashed down the path leading right, knowing that a princess would always be expected to choose the pretty meadow.
After what felt like hours of trees and shadows and the crunching of dried leaves beneath my feet, I emerged into a grassy, emerald-green clearing. In the very center stood a crumbling old well with a rusted plaque on the side. I moved forward cautiously, and the strangest thing happened. I heard voices. But they weren’t coming from behind me, or even anywhere near me. They were coming from the well. Leaning forward, I peered down into its dark depths.
I could see nothing, but the whispered echoes gradually became clearer, and I could just make out a few scattered phrases. There was one that kept recurring, over and over and over again. Make a wish, make a wish, make a wish, it chanted, melodic and alluring. I felt a strange pull towards the well, and a sudden desire to make a wish.
I had no coins to throw, so I slipped off one of my rings and held it out over the gaping mouth of the well. I squeezed my eyes shut and concentrated on my wish. Please let it come true. Inhaling deeply, I released the ring and let it fall into the grasp of the waiting shadows.
At first, nothing happened. Then, a faint tingling assaulted my fingers, slowly spreading throughout my body. As quickly as it happened, the sensation was gone, and everything was still. With a sigh, I turned and started back towards home.
At the edge of the clearing, I turned back. This time, my gaze landed on the plaque. Squinting, I could just make out the warning engraved across it: Be careful what you wish for.
Comments
Yours is the kind of writing that invites someone to plop down in a big armchair and get lost in! Your descriptions flow with such an ease and an airiness: I didn't trip over a single word, or wonder why you'd made any particular choice. I guess that's to say, it all made perfect sense, the direction you took the story and the language you used to bring the reader along with you. Creative take on both the idea of the wishing well, and that turn of phrase: Be careful what you wish for!
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