Workshop > Feedback and Revision
Oct 31

Feedback and Revision

First, take a look around at some of the other pantoums here, or examples that you've found elsewhere. Give some feedback to your peers here. Let them know how the poem worked for you. Did the repetition add to the feeling? Did you learn something or feel a change in yourself as a result of the poem?

After you've given and received feedback on your pantoum, re-write or revise your poem with that feedback in mind. This might be a quick tweak here and there, or a complete re-write. Follow your artistic vision, and use the feedback from your readers to gain perspective.

Post your revised pantoum as a response to this XP, and take a look at what everyone else created!