The ski bends
and releases
pushing me down
the hill
faster and faster
the gates
THWACK
down onto the snow
a rhythm of movement
a dance
where only the legs move
and the upper body
stays quiet
heart and gates
pounding to the
same beat.
and releases
pushing me down
the hill
faster and faster
the gates
THWACK
down onto the snow
a rhythm of movement
a dance
where only the legs move
and the upper body
stays quiet
heart and gates
pounding to the
same beat.
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Firegirl03
Jan 04, 2017
This is really great. I can really feel the movement in this; it captures skiing perfectly. The descriptions give it a rhythmic feel, while still maintaining that motion and speed that comes with skiing.